Battle Buddies
Sometimes you just need a friend to feel safe.7 total reviews
Comment from elchupakabra
And I'm not even going to mention how often he is in there on the weekend." (and not required)
"First, this tub isn't as big as it used to big (be). Second, she'd dump your corpse in the same hole(
Without the photo this piece would be really confusing as there is very little to indicate these are supposed to be animals. It was still humorous though :) Good work and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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And I'm not even going to mention how often he is in there on the weekend." (and not required)
"First, this tub isn't as big as it used to big (be). Second, she'd dump your corpse in the same hole(
Without the photo this piece would be really confusing as there is very little to indicate these are supposed to be animals. It was still humorous though :) Good work and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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They are not animals they are brothers. And the cat is just an animals that comes by while there are going to the bathroom. I am sorry that is hard to understand. Thank you for finding the errors.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
This was an entertaining dialogue.
I enjoyed trying to figure out the relationship between the characters.
Fun and engaging.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hi :)
This was an entertaining dialogue.
I enjoyed trying to figure out the relationship between the characters.
Fun and engaging.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This is an interesting entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I hope so. Thank you for taking the time to review it.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wickedly clever--delightful dialog--snappy snarky banter--spot on--believable. You may have a winner! Cheers LIZ (typos: seventy's s/b seventies; procede s/b proceed; junk character A was inserted after go to sleep.)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Wickedly clever--delightful dialog--snappy snarky banter--spot on--believable. You may have a winner! Cheers LIZ (typos: seventy's s/b seventies; procede s/b proceed; junk character A was inserted after go to sleep.)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for pointing out the errors. I have corrected them.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
What an interesting write that you penned here. The picture accompanying this story is interesting, but I simply can't make the connection. You can blame that on the Chardonnay.vHA HA ! This story is an interesting read that held my attention throughout. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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What an interesting write that you penned here. The picture accompanying this story is interesting, but I simply can't make the connection. You can blame that on the Chardonnay.vHA HA ! This story is an interesting read that held my attention throughout. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
This just sounds like an everyday happening. Sounds like a lot of conversations with my brothers, my mother aNd me, with a lot of attention devoted to bodily functions, I felt completely at home reading this great entry in this dialogue contest, well done, Mia, blessings, Good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This just sounds like an everyday happening. Sounds like a lot of conversations with my brothers, my mother aNd me, with a lot of attention devoted to bodily functions, I felt completely at home reading this great entry in this dialogue contest, well done, Mia, blessings, Good luck, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I am glad it was well received.
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Well done
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a cute script. It's very well-written, interesting. Your dialogue is realistic. I love your bits of humor. Your wisecracks. Your right, teenagers are impossible to understand, lol. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This is a cute script. It's very well-written, interesting. Your dialogue is realistic. I love your bits of humor. Your wisecracks. Your right, teenagers are impossible to understand, lol. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yes they are. Thank you for your kind review
