Hopeful Blessing
1-6-1 Sending you good wishes18 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Very beautiful elements of a great practice to start and end one's days, to have a happy day, we must pray! Thanks for Sharing this poem offering and the photo included. Blessings.
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Very beautiful elements of a great practice to start and end one's days, to have a happy day, we must pray! Thanks for Sharing this poem offering and the photo included. Blessings.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
A wish upon a friend or perhaps a stranger. This creates and passes along good nature, something we all need at this time. Then it adds just one more little bit, a piece of advice as it were that you feel would help.
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A wish upon a friend or perhaps a stranger. This creates and passes along good nature, something we all need at this time. Then it adds just one more little bit, a piece of advice as it were that you feel would help.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Hopeful Blessing, has the right set up and sends out good thoughts for all who may read this 1-6-1 poem. Thanks for the thought.
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This 1-6-1, Hopeful Blessing, has the right set up and sends out good thoughts for all who may read this 1-6-1 poem. Thanks for the thought.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt. I hope it does well in the contest. I wish you the very best of luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt. I hope it does well in the contest. I wish you the very best of luck!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely spiritual poem using this difficult structure. Certainly, praising God and praying would help to have a much better day. Well done and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Lovely spiritual poem using this difficult structure. Certainly, praising God and praying would help to have a much better day. Well done and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image
and presentation.
-You have met all of
the requirements with
the syllable count and rhyme.
-A very good, positive message, too.
-A good entry; good luck,
and have a "happy day!"
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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-A good image
and presentation.
-You have met all of
the requirements with
the syllable count and rhyme.
-A very good, positive message, too.
-A good entry; good luck,
and have a "happy day!"
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Simple words bringing hope and happiness to all when we pray, I think we all need our prayers just now with our ever changing world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Simple words bringing hope and happiness to all when we pray, I think we all need our prayers just now with our ever changing world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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The power of prayer is sometimes the only thing we have.
Comment from harmony13
The poem is short and simple. It also creates a great message. The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments
these words well.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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The poem is short and simple. It also creates a great message. The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliments
these words well.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your appreciation of my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hopeful Blessing
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. First and third lines rhyme. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hopeful Blessing
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. First and third lines rhyme. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
(all the lines rhyme, as the prompt required.)
Comment from zanya
Here's an interesting simple yet profound poetic sentiments expressed here admirably within the confined format of 1-6-1 - perhaps we need to pay more attention to this tenet
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Here's an interesting simple yet profound poetic sentiments expressed here admirably within the confined format of 1-6-1 - perhaps we need to pay more attention to this tenet
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your remarks.
