Some Summer Fun
3-5-7 Don't look now!15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a fun write, great play on words here and congratulations on your win Lisa, well deserved and I only have one six left and it's all yours, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun write, great play on words here and congratulations on your win Lisa, well deserved and I only have one six left and it's all yours, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for rating my poem so highly. I am very grateful.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really like your contest entry - it made me laugh!
Well presented and light hearted - just what I enjoy ;)
Author's note is relatable (Ice creammmmm! Oink!)
Good luck in the voting booth, best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello :)
I really like your contest entry - it made me laugh!
Well presented and light hearted - just what I enjoy ;)
Author's note is relatable (Ice creammmmm! Oink!)
Good luck in the voting booth, best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your upbeat review!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Readers who have had the joy of going skinny dippping will be able to relate. Others may be puzzled about the message of this poem and others may be inspired to do it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Readers who have had the joy of going skinny dippping will be able to relate. Others may be puzzled about the message of this poem and others may be inspired to do it.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review. I guess the main message is that it's great to laugh at ourselves and have fun!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good, short, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I feel that it should do well in the contest, so I wish you great good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a good, short, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I feel that it should do well in the contest, so I wish you great good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind comments.
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You're always welcome.
Comment from jaded831
You are not alone, I have gained weight with this pandemic, I think we all have. Your poem has given me the chance to laugh at myself. Thinking of me in a bathing suit right now is definitely funny.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You are not alone, I have gained weight with this pandemic, I think we all have. Your poem has given me the chance to laugh at myself. Thinking of me in a bathing suit right now is definitely funny.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You can wobble along with me as we laugh at ourselves. Thanks for your review!
Comment from mauial
I love the easy flow of your poem and the humor too. Is the message we should laugh at ourselves? I think that is something we all need to do. It's a humbling experience.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I love the easy flow of your poem and the humor too. Is the message we should laugh at ourselves? I think that is something we all need to do. It's a humbling experience.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I definitely think many people take themselves TOO seriously... I spend a lot of time in hiccuping hysterics... maybe i should take things a bit more seriously, but it's all rather overwhelming sometimes.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest.
--good syllable count
--good connection between lines and flow.
-- nice presentation
--it has a senryu feeling
--i like the topic of fatties :) it's funny...I like the twist at the end
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest.
--good syllable count
--good connection between lines and flow.
-- nice presentation
--it has a senryu feeling
--i like the topic of fatties :) it's funny...I like the twist at the end
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for these comments. i'm pleased you appreciated my poem's qualities.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
As long as there are no cameras welcome - lol! ;) ;) This is an awesome offering for the 3-5-7 prompt - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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As long as there are no cameras welcome - lol! ;) ;) This is an awesome offering for the 3-5-7 prompt - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Tee hee... Definitely no cameras allowed! Thanks for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That is funny. I don't know why they came up with the term "skinny dipping" - I don't think there was any weight limit. Thanks for the smiles. Best wishes in the contest!
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Lol! That is funny. I don't know why they came up with the term "skinny dipping" - I don't think there was any weight limit. Thanks for the smiles. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-7 poem about a bunch of over weight friends who gone skinny dipping in a hot summers day and laugh from their bellies about the contrasting statement.
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A very well-written 3-5-7 poem about a bunch of over weight friends who gone skinny dipping in a hot summers day and laugh from their bellies about the contrasting statement.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
