Freedom Taken, Freedom Given
Impact of a lesson9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Emotional Dependency writing prompt contest.
--Nice presentation.
--You stayed in topic of dependency to drive a car but you're okay without one.
--good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Emotional Dependency writing prompt contest.
--Nice presentation.
--You stayed in topic of dependency to drive a car but you're okay without one.
--good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a really interesting write that you posted. This is a nicely formatted poetic story that rhymes well and flows nicely. The picture accompanying this is appropriate. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a really interesting write that you posted. This is a nicely formatted poetic story that rhymes well and flows nicely. The picture accompanying this is appropriate. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your comments and good wishes.
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Great reminder and remembering. Good description of your feelings of freedom when behind the wheel but the reminder of how easy for our minds to wander and lose focus and be lulled to sleep. Thanks for bringing out that God has a purpose and a plan, but sometimes has to get out attention. Thanks for posting.
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Great reminder and remembering. Good description of your feelings of freedom when behind the wheel but the reminder of how easy for our minds to wander and lose focus and be lulled to sleep. Thanks for bringing out that God has a purpose and a plan, but sometimes has to get out attention. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from roof35
I can tell this is written from the heart. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. I love your last line, "You are a part of a family." Nicely done.
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I can tell this is written from the heart. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. I love your last line, "You are a part of a family." Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from amada
A chapter in emotional dependency, a very tough subject to immerge the writer in...You have done a very good job here, my favorite line is this "made me forget my track of tears..." I like that you show, don't tell the reader. A very good rhyming poem.
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A chapter in emotional dependency, a very tough subject to immerge the writer in...You have done a very good job here, my favorite line is this "made me forget my track of tears..." I like that you show, don't tell the reader. A very good rhyming poem.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Emotional Dependency writing prompt and good luck in the contest!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Perfect entry for the Emotional Dependency writing prompt and good luck in the contest!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your nice comments and good wishes.
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;-)
Comment from harmony13
The words of this poem are heartfelt, clear and creative. I found the
author's words conveying a life lesson. I had times when I've gone
in the wrong direction. I agree with the author "sometimes a sharp
lesson is a blessing". Great poem!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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The words of this poem are heartfelt, clear and creative. I found the
author's words conveying a life lesson. I had times when I've gone
in the wrong direction. I agree with the author "sometimes a sharp
lesson is a blessing". Great poem!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your nice comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well worded poem for the Emotional Dependency writing prompt. It was like a story in a poem to me. Very nice picture also. Please check out this:
When under stress, my life a mess,
(was)
We do finally realize that God is in control and does have plans for our life. And we are part of His family! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very nice and well worded poem for the Emotional Dependency writing prompt. It was like a story in a poem to me. Very nice picture also. Please check out this:
When under stress, my life a mess,
(was)
We do finally realize that God is in control and does have plans for our life. And we are part of His family! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from mermaids
You tell a tale here and it has a lesson. I like how after the accident you took up riding a bike and it brought forth some good feelings. Excellent rhyming of words and a smooth flow of lines. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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You tell a tale here and it has a lesson. I like how after the accident you took up riding a bike and it brought forth some good feelings. Excellent rhyming of words and a smooth flow of lines. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your nice comments and good wishes.
