I too, hope for a cure for your daughter. I'll send a prayer for her to our Lord, Who seems, at the moment, to be the only One Who can help a bit. I had some trouble with the word "hair-shirt" What is that? Also "discomfiture" sounds a bit awkward and made-up to make the rhyme.
Bit you wrote a genuine plea for your daughter. I wish her the best!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
Thanks for the read and comments. Hair-shirt is a form of punishment. I am not completely at ease with discomfiture (no pun intended) however, it is the only word I could think of that makes some sense.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 18-Jul-2020
You are welcome. I was not familiar with the word hair-shirt. Thanks for explaining!