The Two of Me
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering of two-in-one here! ;) I would suggest that, instead of the capitalization, you utilize a different color as the capitalization adversely affects the reading of the original poem and really 'throws off' your reader's emphasis and focus.... Your weaving of two into one definitely took some time - thanx for sharing! ;)
Hearts Smile --> heart's smile
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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A wonderful offering of two-in-one here! ;) I would suggest that, instead of the capitalization, you utilize a different color as the capitalization adversely affects the reading of the original poem and really 'throws off' your reader's emphasis and focus.... Your weaving of two into one definitely took some time - thanx for sharing! ;)
Hearts Smile --> heart's smile
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the Review, Encouragement and Suggestion, I diffinetly Will use the different colored font idea, it never dawned on me to try that. Blessings and Thank you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A nocturnal rhythmic enigmatic atmosphere where the soul is lost to the full moon and the Beast is awaken by the screAm of the night. Behold and hide the peril is near. Thank you for sharing this gotic poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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A nocturnal rhythmic enigmatic atmosphere where the soul is lost to the full moon and the Beast is awaken by the screAm of the night. Behold and hide the peril is near. Thank you for sharing this gotic poem.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your Supportive Review and Kind Encouragement.
