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17 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
I'm catching up on my novels her on FanStory (I've been busy preparting for a vacation). I find McKenzie to be coming around - still vulnerable but understanding things a bit more. I'm afraid something is about to happen and Logan will be put through the ringer once again!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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I'm catching up on my novels her on FanStory (I've been busy preparting for a vacation). I find McKenzie to be coming around - still vulnerable but understanding things a bit more. I'm afraid something is about to happen and Logan will be put through the ringer once again!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you had/have a wonderful vacation.
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
Nice chapter - not much happening, but you need a little 'down-time' in between the exciting stuff to allow the readers' nerves to recuperate. *smile*
Only one small note:
--> Sheila touched her husband('s) hand.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Barbara,
Nice chapter - not much happening, but you need a little 'down-time' in between the exciting stuff to allow the readers' nerves to recuperate. *smile*
Only one small note:
--> Sheila touched her husband('s) hand.
Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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I will make the change. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from judiverse
This has me all excited. I can't wait to learn if anything happens to Mac now that Logan has left for the funeral. She must really be scared if she warned Sheila not to stay, as it might put her and the baby in danger. Great build up to what could be another attempt on Mac's life. Mac is beginning to trust Trey now, so that's good. The alcohol poisoning is still a problem, and it is taking time for Mac to recover. Great characterization. Logan's friends really come through for him. judi
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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This has me all excited. I can't wait to learn if anything happens to Mac now that Logan has left for the funeral. She must really be scared if she warned Sheila not to stay, as it might put her and the baby in danger. Great build up to what could be another attempt on Mac's life. Mac is beginning to trust Trey now, so that's good. The alcohol poisoning is still a problem, and it is taking time for Mac to recover. Great characterization. Logan's friends really come through for him. judi
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Military brothers stick together. Thank you for the kind review.
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I'm sure they do. You're welcome, and I can't stand the suspense! I want to know who did it. judi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Man, everybody is on Mac and Logan love affair:) and they have not said anything officially to each other... yet. Hopefully Mac will recover soon and she will get a chance to start their own family soon. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Man, everybody is on Mac and Logan love affair:) and they have not said anything officially to each other... yet. Hopefully Mac will recover soon and she will get a chance to start their own family soon. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your stories are always like adding the mortar to the bricks one at a time and stacking them in a straight line from the foundation to the roof. Plumb and everything squared. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Your stories are always like adding the mortar to the bricks one at a time and stacking them in a straight line from the foundation to the roof. Plumb and everything squared. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
I think this write is reaching out into a depth of worry. She is not of danger yet or it does not seem that way.
So we have a vase with ashes to contend with.
Shaping something is about to happen. I can tell in your writing. HUM
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I think this write is reaching out into a depth of worry. She is not of danger yet or it does not seem that way.
So we have a vase with ashes to contend with.
Shaping something is about to happen. I can tell in your writing. HUM
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I was rereading and doing a ton of editing on the first story that I posted here. Wow!! I am a much different writer now. hmmm..
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
All seems to be going well with Mac. And smile it's good the see that Mac and Logan are getting closer and closer to a serious romance.
I don't know why I have a feeling that something unexpected will take place during or after the the funeral.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Hello Barb,
All seems to be going well with Mac. And smile it's good the see that Mac and Logan are getting closer and closer to a serious romance.
I don't know why I have a feeling that something unexpected will take place during or after the the funeral.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I can promise you something will happen. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sally Law
Super. I enjoyed the hospital scene and all the juicy bits of human imteractioms in the middle of everything else. It makes life worth living. The romance between Logan and Mackenzie just gets sweeter.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars, dear Barbara.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Super. I enjoyed the hospital scene and all the juicy bits of human imteractioms in the middle of everything else. It makes life worth living. The romance between Logan and Mackenzie just gets sweeter.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars, dear Barbara.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from lancellot
Very well written. It is nice to see what an extended and blended family is supposed to, and how they react when one is hurt or in the hospital. At first it all seemed strange to me, but now I think this is how it should be.
Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Very well written. It is nice to see what an extended and blended family is supposed to, and how they react when one is hurt or in the hospital. At first it all seemed strange to me, but now I think this is how it should be.
Well written.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I think it's how it should be too. I raised four boys, three are married with their own families. We are very close and supportive even though we live miles apart.. I'm in Texas, one is in Colorado, two are in Missouri, but not close to each other. The one, unmarried one is still at home with us. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
So with Mac recovering, and four good friends watching over here Logan needs to go to His Sisters funeral, and this needs to be done. I wonder where to now, they still need evidence to catch Sydney Parks. Beautifully written dear Barbara, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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So with Mac recovering, and four good friends watching over here Logan needs to go to His Sisters funeral, and this needs to be done. I wonder where to now, they still need evidence to catch Sydney Parks. Beautifully written dear Barbara, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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My pleasure
