My Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Chicago, Chicago"My life after meeting Jim.
8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my goodness! It's good you got the repair guys to come out to you. In the process, it seems you had learned lots about engines!
So glad you got to visit in Colorado but I think I'd be scared with driving those steep roads with a big rig!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Oh my goodness! It's good you got the repair guys to come out to you. In the process, it seems you had learned lots about engines!
So glad you got to visit in Colorado but I think I'd be scared with driving those steep roads with a big rig!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments, Helen. I usually try to learn something each day but that day was a day from heck. Colorado was nice even with the roads. Hugs.
Comment from poetwatch
Well Alie you really travel. :) I glad to read your adventures especially when you describe the scenery. I've never been to Arizona, Utah Or Colorado. I've been to Montana, a small town close to Billings. Been to Michigan, Indiana, Illinois, I was 11 years old when my parents took us working the fields. Did it for 4 years. I loved the clean air and all the country. I when to Minnesota in 89 to work, but it was mostly people and they weren't happy. Give your description in every road trip, let us see the Country. Thank you. :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Well Alie you really travel. :) I glad to read your adventures especially when you describe the scenery. I've never been to Arizona, Utah Or Colorado. I've been to Montana, a small town close to Billings. Been to Michigan, Indiana, Illinois, I was 11 years old when my parents took us working the fields. Did it for 4 years. I loved the clean air and all the country. I when to Minnesota in 89 to work, but it was mostly people and they weren't happy. Give your description in every road trip, let us see the Country. Thank you. :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Jose, for reading, reviewing and your absolutely great comments. Oh and thank you for the six stars.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, allie. Whew! my dear friend, Iam worn ot both physically and mentally after living through this read. LOL Poor Jim. I'll bet he was fit to be tie dwhen he blew that turbo. They are not cheap. That much I remember from my days in the trucking biz, back in the eighties.
And poor you. How in the world did you occupy yourself for all that down time?
I am looking forward to your next adventure, dear friend so you can fill me in. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Hi, allie. Whew! my dear friend, Iam worn ot both physically and mentally after living through this read. LOL Poor Jim. I'll bet he was fit to be tie dwhen he blew that turbo. They are not cheap. That much I remember from my days in the trucking biz, back in the eighties.
And poor you. How in the world did you occupy yourself for all that down time?
I am looking forward to your next adventure, dear friend so you can fill me in. : ) Bob
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Bob for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. We were off the road from late Sunday (about 4pm) to Tuesday noon, so it wasn't too bad. When we got the semi in Nov. 2014, the agreement was that even though it was a 10 speed manual, I would drive 1/3 of the time/distance. Then Jim nattered about my driving so I parked it, got into the passenger seat and swore never to drive it again. I always keep a good book handy lol.
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LOL Can I interest you in a personally inscribed copy of one of mine (wink) Bob
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Ahaaaa I have one lol.
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I had to try, my friend. : ) Bob
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LOL, it was a good try.
Comment from royowen
I am traveling vicariously with you, although our caravaning days are now behind us, we traversed this country of ours a few times, we're about the size as you US so it took some doing. Breakdowns on the road are a hitch, blessings Roy
Typo : the cliffs dropped of(f)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I am traveling vicariously with you, although our caravaning days are now behind us, we traversed this country of ours a few times, we're about the size as you US so it took some doing. Breakdowns on the road are a hitch, blessings Roy
Typo : the cliffs dropped of(f)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you Roy for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I will fix that in a moment.
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Most welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Always a new adventure with you, my lady!! ;) Bad luck catches up to us all once in a while, but it sounds like y'all fared well this time! ;) Oh, but you had me laughing with "gave Jim something to do"...So important for the husband to have something to do if yours is anything like mine! And that steep, crazy drive? Been on some of those and I'm pretty sure my husband COULD NOT take it! ;) :) I always wanted to travel, but I might have to live vicariously through you... we'll see! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Alie! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and edit your 'background' notes as they are cut off in the character limit... :) :)
with of course the dead --> with, of course, the dead
inclined but from what I understand is that it is not good if the tiny --> inclined, but from what I understand, it is not good if tiny
This way it gave Jim --> This way, it gave Jim
eight am, Tuesday morning. --> eight Tuesday morning. [no need for the a.m. as you state it is morning... :) :)]
where were had planned --> where we had planned
an hour we were --> an hour, we were
middle of no where --> middle of nowhere
way, they were six hours away. Let me tell you I have never seen hills and valleys such as these. Up --> way.They were six hours away. [new paragraph begins here] Let me tell you, I have never seen hills and valleys such as these! Up
dropped of about a foot from the road and it was --> dropped off about a foot from the road, and it was
supper, Ginny was --> supper, and Ginny was
On Tuesday they took us --> On Tuesday, they took us
Indiana and Jim will be --> Indiana. Jim will be
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Always a new adventure with you, my lady!! ;) Bad luck catches up to us all once in a while, but it sounds like y'all fared well this time! ;) Oh, but you had me laughing with "gave Jim something to do"...So important for the husband to have something to do if yours is anything like mine! And that steep, crazy drive? Been on some of those and I'm pretty sure my husband COULD NOT take it! ;) :) I always wanted to travel, but I might have to live vicariously through you... we'll see! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, Alie! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and edit your 'background' notes as they are cut off in the character limit... :) :)
with of course the dead --> with, of course, the dead
inclined but from what I understand is that it is not good if the tiny --> inclined, but from what I understand, it is not good if tiny
This way it gave Jim --> This way, it gave Jim
eight am, Tuesday morning. --> eight Tuesday morning. [no need for the a.m. as you state it is morning... :) :)]
where were had planned --> where we had planned
an hour we were --> an hour, we were
middle of no where --> middle of nowhere
way, they were six hours away. Let me tell you I have never seen hills and valleys such as these. Up --> way.They were six hours away. [new paragraph begins here] Let me tell you, I have never seen hills and valleys such as these! Up
dropped of about a foot from the road and it was --> dropped off about a foot from the road, and it was
supper, Ginny was --> supper, and Ginny was
On Tuesday they took us --> On Tuesday, they took us
Indiana and Jim will be --> Indiana. Jim will be
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Yvette for reading, reviewing and your great comments and corrections. I will fix those in a moment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are such adventurers to be travelling about like this and I admire you for that. I could never do it, I like my home comforts far too much. But you are seeing different places and enjoying yourselves. Glad you got the truck fixed okay so that you can continue your journey, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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You are such adventurers to be travelling about like this and I admire you for that. I could never do it, I like my home comforts far too much. But you are seeing different places and enjoying yourselves. Glad you got the truck fixed okay so that you can continue your journey, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments, love Alie.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I continue to like this chapter, and I have enjoyed the orderly taletelling, organized plot development, adventure continues, curious ending; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I continue to like this chapter, and I have enjoyed the orderly taletelling, organized plot development, adventure continues, curious ending; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A better title for your book will be Life on wheelsð???anyway this is an interesting story with lots of geographical landmarks for people who don't know the United States. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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A better title for your book will be Life on wheelsð???anyway this is an interesting story with lots of geographical landmarks for people who don't know the United States. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
