Lucy's Luxury Libidinous Life
An exercise in alliteration8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Wonderful poem entry for the Alliteration Celebration
Contest. You did well with the alliteration of L. So many words starting with the same letter yet you made it work well and made sense all the way through.
Well done, Lisa May.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Wonderful poem entry for the Alliteration Celebration
Contest. You did well with the alliteration of L. So many words starting with the same letter yet you made it work well and made sense all the way through.
Well done, Lisa May.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much for your comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is rather a lustful lover's lament here as lucy's likes are laden with lucky ludicrous limericks here, ha ha ha, a feast of alliteration here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is rather a lustful lover's lament here as lucy's likes are laden with lucky ludicrous limericks here, ha ha ha, a feast of alliteration here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much for your comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying.
Comment from Charity Taniguchi
Wow...a tongue twister. I love this poem a lot because I learned a lot of new words; like libidinous (that's what actually caught my eye), languidly (I love this one and make a mental note to use it one day), lurex (I did not know it was a type of fabric), just to name a few. My favorite phrase is "lingering, lustful, layovers" I want to live it haha :) Keep up the awesome writing.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Wow...a tongue twister. I love this poem a lot because I learned a lot of new words; like libidinous (that's what actually caught my eye), languidly (I love this one and make a mental note to use it one day), lurex (I did not know it was a type of fabric), just to name a few. My favorite phrase is "lingering, lustful, layovers" I want to live it haha :) Keep up the awesome writing.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much for your comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You did this so well! I thought the contest length was 8 lines, or was that the minimum? Latex and lace, leather and lederhosen. She sounds confused. Or - liberated? Hah!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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You did this so well! I thought the contest length was 8 lines, or was that the minimum? Latex and lace, leather and lederhosen. She sounds confused. Or - liberated? Hah!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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(8 lines was the minimum) Thanks very much for your comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying. I think Lucy as depicted has quite a liberated attitude to most things.
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Likeable and lucky, lol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLiteration indeed. Delightful wit and whimsy-Love the Lurid Lurex Lingerie and the Leather Lederhosen! Good Luck in the contest. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLiteration indeed. Delightful wit and whimsy-Love the Lurid Lurex Lingerie and the Leather Lederhosen! Good Luck in the contest. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much for your comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying.
I've always liked the look of lederhosen, hehe. (But I am not Lucy)
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I didn't realize this was you--blind review!
Comment from January L'Angelle
Lascivious Latina lesbian lovers! OMG! That's hilarious! Not only have you used many alliterations, you didn't just throw a bunch of them out there. These actually make a really good story. This is a plethora of "L's" and its a "likable lexicon, lending levity" I really enjoyed this poem! -January L. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Lascivious Latina lesbian lovers! OMG! That's hilarious! Not only have you used many alliterations, you didn't just throw a bunch of them out there. These actually make a really good story. This is a plethora of "L's" and its a "likable lexicon, lending levity" I really enjoyed this poem! -January L. :)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your enjoyable review comments. It's always a challenge to string so many words together this way, but fun trying.
Comment from Tootsie
Wow! How did you think of all these words beginning with the letter "L"
This is quite an undertaking and believe me it was fun to read.
Very few people could do this, and good luck in the contest, you earned it.
Tootsie
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Wow! How did you think of all these words beginning with the letter "L"
This is quite an undertaking and believe me it was fun to read.
Very few people could do this, and good luck in the contest, you earned it.
Tootsie
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I saw a photo of the Tyrolean lederhosen pants and my friend has a labrador dog, which inspired the poem and it took off from there. I found the contest prompt was a good exercise in vocabulary.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from roof35
I had to see it to believe anyone could do it. But you did and very well, too. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your poem and Lucy is lovely. This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I had to see it to believe anyone could do it. But you did and very well, too. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your poem and Lucy is lovely. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thanks for reviewing Lucy's rather raunchy lifestyle!
I saw the lederhosen photo and my friend has a labrador dog, which inspired the flight of fancy.
