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Lord, I will cry...

A lament.

21 total reviews 
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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The Lord's desire for His children is unfathomable. It is for those that are His, that have fallen back, and those that haven't yet received Him. The harvest is plentious but the laborers are few.... Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done brother!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
    Thanks Jeffrey , for these perceptive comments review, blessings Roy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- this is one that sings to the Christian soul so loudly, Roy!! ;) Love the emphasis on the personal choice, but, in the end, it is God's laws that will be the judgement... ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks Yvette, for these excellent comments and delightful review, blessings, Roy
Comment from richie b
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Roy,
There are times when we need to shout to the
Lord, empty our heart and confess our weakness's.
We must recognize Him as Lord and fully accept
his mercy and forgiveness. Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks Richie, for these excellent comments and wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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So true we need the innocence from the beginning before we got corrupted by the cruel world we had to be. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks Iza, for the wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the enlightenment we experience when we first learn about the presence of God within us and we know we will become less tempted to sin before Him.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much for these excellent comments and super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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WOW! Powerful words there, Roy. I wish the world would wake up and know that our fate is in God's hands. He is not pleased with us at all at this time. Will we get another chance or will this be the end of the world as we know it> Well done. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much Nancy, for these excellent comments and super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job, Roy, with your lament. Your presentation is great--the color scheme--mournful, the image--fitting, the rhymes--great, and the message--outstanding. Your poem paints a picture of opposites--those who hear and pray for God's call and will be ready and those who do what they want to thinking they have plenty of time to change--but they don't. Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks Jan, for these fantastic comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from GE Parson
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Brother Roy,
your poems are always based on a Scripture passage, and they always speak to my soul Looking foward every day "To pass through the veil at curtains fall"
Prayer Request
My older than me sister(84) Sharon, is facing her"apointed time." She is very sick with numerous problems and is down to 88lbs. Her husband, Gus, is 90 yrs. old and in fairly good health.
Thank you, Brother Jerry




 Comment Written 29-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Of course I will pray, wisdom or healing is needed, ive prayed fo both, God?s solution is always the best. Thank you for your wonderful comments and faithfulness, blessings Roy
reply by GE Parson on 30-Jun-2020
    Thank you for praying. God ushered her into Heaven this morning at 5:00 AM
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    That?s where she is meant to be, good place Jerry
Comment from ameen786
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Yes sir, it's loud and clear, if only man heeds! Roy my friend, you're one wonderful poet; thank you for sharing this beautiful poem in gravitating verses with a theme enough to wake up the sleeping souls.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks Ameen, for these fantastic comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from DeboraDyess
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Roy, I believe this is the first time I've seen you use KJV for the verse. Not that I object -- love KJV.
The poem is sadly prophetic. We have, indeed, turned away from God's cry for our salvation. And time is short. A good 'call to action' for both believers and non-believers.
Thank you for doing that here!
Be blessed,
Deb

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Yes Deb, those that have tasted God?s glory, will hopefully come back to the way, and those that are damaged and discouraged are healed, well done, blessings, Roy