Nature's Gift of Quietude
5-7-5 Beauty in the mountains11 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Thank you for taking me to a place of serenity even if it was far a moment. Your words just soothed my soul and the picture added a touch of magic. Sounds like a winner to me. The entire package gets a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking me to a place of serenity even if it was far a moment. Your words just soothed my soul and the picture added a touch of magic. Sounds like a winner to me. The entire package gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! I appreciate the time you took and your comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
5-7-5 writing prompt contest. How did I miss this prompt? I love to write 5/7/5s. Yours is well written. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the play on words.
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Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
5-7-5 writing prompt contest. How did I miss this prompt? I love to write 5/7/5s. Yours is well written. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the play on words.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
Comment from karenina
Love the gift-rapt play on words! Clever and perfectly suited to the scene you are describing in your 5-7-5! Wouldn't mind spending a lifetime or two there myself!--Karenina
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Love the gift-rapt play on words! Clever and perfectly suited to the scene you are describing in your 5-7-5! Wouldn't mind spending a lifetime or two there myself!--Karenina
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the way you use your words. The phrase "muted in mist" is a very clever way to express the way they "Peaks" are covered.
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I love the way you use your words. The phrase "muted in mist" is a very clever way to express the way they "Peaks" are covered.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
Comment from Diana Kane
Beautifully written and gives the reader an image to focus on. The beauty comes through in the words. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Beautifully written and gives the reader an image to focus on. The beauty comes through in the words. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Magnificent. The wordplay on rapt earns your stars in itself. Lovely alliteration Muted in Mist...and lots of Ts throughout. You may have a winner. Cheers. LIz
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Magnificent. The wordplay on rapt earns your stars in itself. Lovely alliteration Muted in Mist...and lots of Ts throughout. You may have a winner. Cheers. LIz
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thanks for appreciating the wordplay. (I've noticed on previous occasions when I indulge myself in wordplay some people think they are typos!)
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Tell me about it! I posted a satire piece consisting entirely of gross errors in usage, misspellings, grammatical atrocities, and utter illogic. Despite the hints in title and description BEYOND ALL HOPE OF REPAIR: SENTENCED TO DEATH, and despite that the nonsense starts three words in, and despite the punchline, and despite the confession in the footnote--half the readers STILL took it seriously. Some auto-fived the monstrosity, politely expressing confusion and pointing out a few of the myriad errors--a few high-fivers seriously lauded the writing. If you want a chuckle--check it out--you don't have to slog through the mess if it's not your kind of fun--just look at the punchline and footnotes and peruse the reviews! I cannot BELIEVE anyone took this at face value!
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Tell me about it! I posted a satire piece consisting entirely of gross errors in usage, misspellings, grammatical atrocities, and utter illogic. Despite the hints in title and description BEYOND ALL HOPE OF REPAIR: SENTENCED TO DEATH, and despite that the nonsense starts three words in, and despite the punchline, and despite the confession in the footnote--half the readers STILL took it seriously. Some auto-fived the monstrosity, politely expressing confusion and pointing out a few of the myriad errors--a few high-fivers seriously lauded the writing. If you want a chuckle--check it out--you don't have to slog through the mess if it's not your kind of fun--just look at the punchline and footnotes and peruse the reviews! I cannot BELIEVE anyone took this at face value!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
You adhered to the rules of the writing prompt contest;-) I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 and it was an excellent job!
I appreciate you sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
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You adhered to the rules of the writing prompt contest;-) I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 and it was an excellent job!
I appreciate you sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
Comment from roof35
This is a beautiful five/seven/five that follows all the rules. The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with the words as it sets up the serene feeling. It is very nicely done.
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This is a beautiful five/seven/five that follows all the rules. The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with the words as it sets up the serene feeling. It is very nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is beautiful, and your message is strong--nature can and does calm us when we stop long enough to immerse ourselves in it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is beautiful, and your message is strong--nature can and does calm us when we stop long enough to immerse ourselves in it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
