Corona Virus Frightens Me
a Kyrielle33 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Your poem brought my mind to a person in the Bible by the name of JOB. That which he feared the most came upon him.
Think about it.
Stay safe and abide by the rules.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Your poem brought my mind to a person in the Bible by the name of JOB. That which he feared the most came upon him.
Think about it.
Stay safe and abide by the rules.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Ben, let us hope we can avoid Job?s torment. Many thanks for sharing my poem and my concern. Rod
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Hard to say what God has on His mind.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Corona Virus Frightens Me', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. It's only my opinion, but there are very few people the Corona Virus, doesn't frighten. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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"Corona Virus Frightens Me', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. It's only my opinion, but there are very few people the Corona Virus, doesn't frighten. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you, duchess, for your very kind praise of my poem. I am delighted it was a pleasure to read and there will be more postings coming. Rod
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent poem on the dreaded Covid-19 virus and the burnout that many of us are experiencing. I loved your humor on the subject and I think we are need a healthy dose of humor to get us through.
Well done and now go wash your hands (again).
Blessings and stay safe and well.
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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An excellent poem on the dreaded Covid-19 virus and the burnout that many of us are experiencing. I loved your humor on the subject and I think we are need a healthy dose of humor to get us through.
Well done and now go wash your hands (again).
Blessings and stay safe and well.
Janet
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, Janet, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was excellent. The Corona virus frightens me, too. It's been going on for a long time now, and we've been told it could still be around at Christmas. :( I liked the way you wrote this, the repeating 4th line in each stanza really pushes this nightmare home. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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This was excellent. The Corona virus frightens me, too. It's been going on for a long time now, and we've been told it could still be around at Christmas. :( I liked the way you wrote this, the repeating 4th line in each stanza really pushes this nightmare home. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I am delighted my message came across so well. Many thanks, Sandra, for your kind praise.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Covid-19 burnout writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. You followed the rules and mentioned covid19.
I agree with you. It's hard but we must do it to stay alive and/or save someone else. I had a cold for three weeks and I am scared I have it. I'm terrorized by the thought of being put on a ventilator..at that. Point most people don't make it. I'm having a covid19 test today...sigh...
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Covid-19 burnout writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. You followed the rules and mentioned covid19.
I agree with you. It's hard but we must do it to stay alive and/or save someone else. I had a cold for three weeks and I am scared I have it. I'm terrorized by the thought of being put on a ventilator..at that. Point most people don't make it. I'm having a covid19 test today...sigh...
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Gypsy, I do hope the test results are negative and you just have a bad cold. Many thanks for sharing my poem.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are alarming, interesting and creative. The Corona
Virus frightens me too. The words of this poem flow and connect well.
I like the repeat of words the author uses at the end of each stanza.
The artwork is unique and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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The author's words are alarming, interesting and creative. The Corona
Virus frightens me too. The words of this poem flow and connect well.
I like the repeat of words the author uses at the end of each stanza.
The artwork is unique and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, harmony, for your very kind praise of my poem.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you expressed very well, the fears of all of us, that we just pretend that Corona doesn't exist. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I think you expressed very well, the fears of all of us, that we just pretend that Corona doesn't exist. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you, a Iza, for sharing my poem. I am very pleased my message came through
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This poem is clever, forthright and very well done. It inspires compassion: for you, for us all. You have summarized the situation very well, and done so poetically. It's absolutely honest.
The illustration is excellent. I'm not sure if that's someone being overcome by Coronavirus/ fear of Coronavirus, or Coronavirus being wiped out by a soap bubble, but whichever way, it works.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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This poem is clever, forthright and very well done. It inspires compassion: for you, for us all. You have summarized the situation very well, and done so poetically. It's absolutely honest.
The illustration is excellent. I'm not sure if that's someone being overcome by Coronavirus/ fear of Coronavirus, or Coronavirus being wiped out by a soap bubble, but whichever way, it works.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I am very pleased my poem made its point clearly, Mary Kay. Thank you so much for your kind praise.
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You're very welcome, Rod. I really liked your poem a lot :-)
Stay safe, be blessed. - Mary Kay
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
You have most certainly captured the essence of the contest challenge. I've been quarantined (like you) for what feels like forever!!! And, like you I wonder about the sanity of those who ignore the warnings, as I sit in my living room with my TV and my snacks... and if the virus continues, I have Netflix and Grubhub, so I'll be OK!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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You have most certainly captured the essence of the contest challenge. I've been quarantined (like you) for what feels like forever!!! And, like you I wonder about the sanity of those who ignore the warnings, as I sit in my living room with my TV and my snacks... and if the virus continues, I have Netflix and Grubhub, so I'll be OK!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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You are playing it safe and I commend you. Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Boogienights
I loved this and voted for it because it reminds me of my husband. He is deathly afraid of the virus and so am I, but someone has to shop and pay Bill's so it falls to me. I'm sure what you have penned here is a reflection of how many people feel. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I loved this and voted for it because it reminds me of my husband. He is deathly afraid of the virus and so am I, but someone has to shop and pay Bill's so it falls to me. I'm sure what you have penned here is a reflection of how many people feel. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I truly appreciate your kind praise, Boogienights, and your vote.
