The Simpleton
7/9/7 poem10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
CONGRATS on Second place, Kamran!! ;) Sorry I'm so late in this, but I got completely 'swamped' with sorting and packing and decisions to 'downsize' over here, that I lost track of anything but those plans (and I'm still in the middle of them - just taking a bit of breather for a few hours!). Thanx so much for joining the obscurity this time around - hopefully by next month I'll be 'on top of things' - lol!! ;) :) Take care out there - Yvette :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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CONGRATS on Second place, Kamran!! ;) Sorry I'm so late in this, but I got completely 'swamped' with sorting and packing and decisions to 'downsize' over here, that I lost track of anything but those plans (and I'm still in the middle of them - just taking a bit of breather for a few hours!). Thanx so much for joining the obscurity this time around - hopefully by next month I'll be 'on top of things' - lol!! ;) :) Take care out there - Yvette :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Yvette my friend, I thank you for making time; always a honor to read your wonderful comments; hope you get to through your busy schedule soon; please take care.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting entry for the Spiritual Poem writing prompt. It should do well in this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is an interesting entry for the Spiritual Poem writing prompt. It should do well in this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hello Rebecca and thank you for your time and the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the Obscure Word 7-9-7 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I live the presentation. Good word choice and definition....it defines Trump nicely lol Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the Obscure Word 7-9-7 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I live the presentation. Good word choice and definition....it defines Trump nicely lol Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hello Gypsy, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you my friend.
Comment from Joan E.
I do not think he has said these words yet, but I would not put it past him. Thank you for the new vocabulary word and the appropriate application in this 7-9-7. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I do not think he has said these words yet, but I would not put it past him. Thank you for the new vocabulary word and the appropriate application in this 7-9-7. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Joan my friend, I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you and you have a wonderful week.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
I can see how "cockalorum" may describe Mr. Trump...although he is not tiny in the physical sense.
Of course, I could also apply that characterization to a few other folks "across the aisle" as well... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
I can see how "cockalorum" may describe Mr. Trump...although he is not tiny in the physical sense.
Of course, I could also apply that characterization to a few other folks "across the aisle" as well... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Hello Mrs. KT and thank you for your time and the thoughtful review; I agree they are all the same.
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:)
Comment from BHWatson
Couldn't agree more with the sentiments expressed herein. I will have to file cockalorum in my lexicon. Well done! Good luck with the competition. Bullied indeed!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Couldn't agree more with the sentiments expressed herein. I will have to file cockalorum in my lexicon. Well done! Good luck with the competition. Bullied indeed!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Hello friend and welcome to FanStory; I appreciate your visit and glad you like the write; thank you very much; all the best on the site.
Comment from roof35
I love this one. Wish I had a six star rating to give you. This is absolutely on target. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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I love this one. Wish I had a six star rating to give you. This is absolutely on target. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is very well done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Much obliged my friend, I thank you for stopping by and the encouraging review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
US President Donald Trump is now a bully factor for he is a cockalorum in chief, better designated; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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US President Donald Trump is now a bully factor for he is a cockalorum in chief, better designated; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the glad you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Barbaraj1
I never hear of the word cockalorum. But I do now. That word fits our President perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I think you may have a winner. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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I never hear of the word cockalorum. But I do now. That word fits our President perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I think you may have a winner. Stay safe.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from lancellot
Okay the word count in good and you've fulfilled the contest requirements. Not sure this type of thing is what the country needs right now, but you have the right to do it. I think the added words within the picture may be a distraction, as first I thought they were the content.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Okay the word count in good and you've fulfilled the contest requirements. Not sure this type of thing is what the country needs right now, but you have the right to do it. I think the added words within the picture may be a distraction, as first I thought they were the content.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend and thank you for the visit and thoughtful review.
