Scene at a Time Portal 3
one scene script with Pons and Ned16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Your imagination from birds and their droppings never ceases to amaze, Bill! ;) Thanx for sharing!! :) Yvette
P.S. Slowly catching up ... I think. Will probably fall even farther behind shortly!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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LOL!! Your imagination from birds and their droppings never ceases to amaze, Bill! ;) Thanx for sharing!! :) Yvette
P.S. Slowly catching up ... I think. Will probably fall even farther behind shortly!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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My son and daughter are high school teachers; my nephew and niece, and their spouses, are all teachers or administration. What a task!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I must have missed 1 & 2. I'll have to go look for them. I had to agree with Ned, it's his dream, so he won't be having turds dropped on his head! LOL, I knew he wasn't a daft as he made out to be! Well done, I loved this one. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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I must have missed 1 & 2. I'll have to go look for them. I had to agree with Ned, it's his dream, so he won't be having turds dropped on his head! LOL, I knew he wasn't a daft as he made out to be! Well done, I loved this one. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha entreating as usual. "
Ned: I was hopin' we'd be talkin' Inkelish. (Suddenly looking up) Hey! Looky there, Pons! It's one a them perrytackles!
Pons: Pterodactyl is pronounced with T, Ned. The P is silent." And here goes their pre-dino adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Ha, ha, ha entreating as usual. "
Ned: I was hopin' we'd be talkin' Inkelish. (Suddenly looking up) Hey! Looky there, Pons! It's one a them perrytackles!
Pons: Pterodactyl is pronounced with T, Ned. The P is silent." And here goes their pre-dino adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Iza.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
These boys sure get to see and experience strange things. Their language is still comical with Ned's pronunciation and his outlook on life. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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These boys sure get to see and experience strange things. Their language is still comical with Ned's pronunciation and his outlook on life. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thanks, TT
Comment from Earl Corp
Getting hit with pterodactyl poop has to be the worse, I'll bet it was stinky. I'm curious to see where they go next. It makes sense Ned wouldn't get pooped on in his own dream.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Getting hit with pterodactyl poop has to be the worse, I'll bet it was stinky. I'm curious to see where they go next. It makes sense Ned wouldn't get pooped on in his own dream.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Earl. That?s what I thought.
Comment from Cass Carlton
I have been wondering what these two,poor, silly people have been up to lately. It is quite diverting to find them wandering Time and Space. I just hope they don't mess with something or someone really relevant and stuff things up even more than they are now . (If that's at all possible).Your writing intrigues me. It so full of mindless off the wall characters, that make the most imbecilic remarks, that I question whether it is your own slightly skewed view of humanity that we are made privy to. It wouldn't be at all surprising really, after all (God Bless "em Semper Fi) a stint in the Marine Corp and decades of teaching teenage children would be quite an intellectual burden. I have known grown men cry over being posted back to "Zombie school. Not that I think for one minute you have lost any of your wits or wit. Quite the reverse. You have developed an insight into the "workings" of slower minds than your own and presented them in glorious techicolour to we Fanstorians. It is interesting to study each one and think about their mental processes. Nice one Bill cheers Cass
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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I have been wondering what these two,poor, silly people have been up to lately. It is quite diverting to find them wandering Time and Space. I just hope they don't mess with something or someone really relevant and stuff things up even more than they are now . (If that's at all possible).Your writing intrigues me. It so full of mindless off the wall characters, that make the most imbecilic remarks, that I question whether it is your own slightly skewed view of humanity that we are made privy to. It wouldn't be at all surprising really, after all (God Bless "em Semper Fi) a stint in the Marine Corp and decades of teaching teenage children would be quite an intellectual burden. I have known grown men cry over being posted back to "Zombie school. Not that I think for one minute you have lost any of your wits or wit. Quite the reverse. You have developed an insight into the "workings" of slower minds than your own and presented them in glorious techicolour to we Fanstorians. It is interesting to study each one and think about their mental processes. Nice one Bill cheers Cass
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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I certainly enjoyed your remarkable review, Cass. Thank you for your kind acceptance of everyman Pons and not-so Ned.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, the further you go on on with this time travel adventure, the more delightful it becomes.
I hope you let Ned keep that special dream machine for a few more scenes.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Dear Bill, the further you go on on with this time travel adventure, the more delightful it becomes.
I hope you let Ned keep that special dream machine for a few more scenes.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Into the future then.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute script. You've created a very funny character in Ned. I guess Pons is the straight guy. If is's a dream, I wonder how he's managing to get his pronunciation corrected. I look forward to hearing from these characters again.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is a cute script. You've created a very funny character in Ned. I guess Pons is the straight guy. If is's a dream, I wonder how he's managing to get his pronunciation corrected. I look forward to hearing from these characters again.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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In dreamworld all is possible.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, some great lines in this hilarious script. I especially liked the part about the petting zoo, because I happen to agree with that assessment of the situation.
I also enjoyed what I saw was a reference to "The Cell" with the device to be pressed on his wrist. But I guess where else are you going to put the dream entering device.
Most clever premise and I can see lots of potential for development with this.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Ha, some great lines in this hilarious script. I especially liked the part about the petting zoo, because I happen to agree with that assessment of the situation.
I also enjoyed what I saw was a reference to "The Cell" with the device to be pressed on his wrist. But I guess where else are you going to put the dream entering device.
Most clever premise and I can see lots of potential for development with this.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Gloria, for your kind review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
Bill, These are two crazy and funny dudes in your script. You used very cute and funny descriptive words. I can only imagine walking around with them. What a funny trip that would be. Thanks for sharing and the laugh. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Bill, These are two crazy and funny dudes in your script. You used very cute and funny descriptive words. I can only imagine walking around with them. What a funny trip that would be. Thanks for sharing and the laugh. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Teri.
