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Paid in full

Christ's purchase

52 total reviews 
Comment from MissMerri
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A lot is said in this three-line poem, and I found it amazing you could so deftly put the whole story of salvation into so few words. No wonder this won first place in the contest! Congratulations and well done! MM

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    thank you so much dear lady

Comment from Raul1
Excellent
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Congratulations on winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Good job. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    thank you
Comment from nassus1957
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Another six stars for an exceptional write. You were able to drive home your message in so few words. Keep evangelizing the words of God through your artistry. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    thank you
Comment from Ben Colder
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It is finished. Now we wait for His return and from the looks of things it is not far away. Now, that will be the day.
Good poem, strong with meaning in just a few words.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Blessings and thank you for sharing Paid in Full. In 14 syllables you tell the resurrection Story, and the title tells the "why" of the Resurrection story, to pay the price in full for the sins of mankind.
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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    thank you
Comment from ameen786
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Congratulations! You masterfully summed up the history of Christianity in so few words and brought the message home in the last two words.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    thank you
Comment from Susan Larson
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How succinct and concise to relate the message of the entire New Testament in so few words. Beautiful picture, too. This would make a wonderful bookmark for people to see every time they came back to their current book.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    thank you
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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What a wonderful way to present in the 2-10-2 category. You were able to tell the whole story within the short parameters of the form. Great job and beautiful artwork choice. Very well done!
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

Comment from Peter Gardner
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wonderful synopsis of what Jesus has done for us. Congratulations on winning the contest. I wish you well with your future writing. Retirement can bring out the best in us!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020

Comment from karenina
Excellent
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I was away a few days and see that I missed the opportunity to vote. Still, congratulations on what I would have picked as the winner! (I know because the notice to vote was in my message box and I voted for this and only then received the drop down that the voting was over.)-- Somedays I don't think this human race deserved His sacrifice... How blessed are we!
--Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020