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Baby Panda

a 2/10/2 poem for a contest

9 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a great poem entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt. This is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 2-10-2 poem about the cute baby panda that will chew on bamboo all day long and just look awesome in his black and white outfit.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thank you :)
Comment from June Sargent
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This is so adorable! They do eat quite a bit for such cute cuddly creatures. But that is what makes them so lovable. This is a great entry for the contest. Something lighthearted and joyful in this day and age of stress and negativity...

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much for your review and valuable feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Your picture is gorgeous:) This is a very lovely and joyful entry - baby
panda chews bamboo all day without fret --
gorgeous"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much for your review, Iza.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Smiles to your a 2/10/2 poem for the contest the picture of the Baby Panda is precious. And thank you for to indention of the word gorgeous. I'm curious what is the black and red font mean?

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, Gert, I am glad you like it. I hope you are doing well, my friend. May you have a peaceful evening.

    The word gorgeous means beautiful.

    The word gorge means overeating..... it's a play on words. I wrote in two color fonts so you notice it

    'Gorge'ouse
    Gorgeous
reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jun-2020
    Hello unknown author you are welcome.
    Gert
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! They are certainly BIG eaters and quite lazy, aren't they?! ;) :) But they really are so very unique that they still fascinate... :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, Yvette, I am glad you like it. I hope you are doing well, my friend. May you have a peaceful evening.
Comment from Janilou
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Very clever play on words here. I enjoyed your poem. The artwork is also very cute!

baby
panda chews bamboo all day without fret --
gorgeous

I've often wondered why they eat bamboo when it takes so much for them to get the nutrients they need?

Great poem. All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, Jan. I appreciate your time and effort. Thank you for the feedback too.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What an adorable image, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest entry. Great job with the syllable count per line. I like the way you color-coded gorge-ous to signify how pandas have to gorge on bamboo. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, Jan. I appreciate your time and effort. Thank you for the feedback too.

Comment from roof35
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This is a cute play on words. You have a lovely illustration that, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. You have followed all the rules. This is very nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and time.