Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is definitely a nonsense poem fit for the Funny Nonsense Poem writing prompt entry. It should do well in the contest. I wish you good luck!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed the nonsense.
Geoff

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 21-Jun-2020

I did!

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A very cute nonsense poem! I enjoyed it! I really liked when you talked about the cowmoos run free! It is easily read and is absolutely nonsense at its best! Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed the nonsense.
Geoff

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the Funny Nonsense Poem writing prompt contest.

Funny and whimsical...could be for children too. Great imagery :) it's a very clever poem. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I loved this poem, which would glorify the wondrous child poem, which I think this would be an outstanding child's poem with illustration would be very suitable for the knee tappers, but I guess this would be also an outstanding entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks foryourreview. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by royowen on 19-Jun-2020

Most welcome

Comment from Tootsie

Exceptional

Yes I am going to give this poem 6 stars because it makes me smile and children's imagination can just run wild. It just brings all kinds of happy thoughts and friendships that can last forever in our young hearts,
You did very well including the nonsense of the poem and I hope you will write more poems for our enjoyment.

Thanks for sharing Tootsie

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review and the six stars. Both are appreciated.

Comment from BHWatson

Good

Animals sharing their thoughts about life beyond the farm is sweet and enticing to read. I would recommend this read for children and as a good read aloud. There are some areas where the rhyming feels awkward but easily figured out with some revision. Nice.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very nice. I can see this being read to children in a library or in pre-school. It has the rhymes that catch them, and the animals that amaze them and the imaginative tale that keeps enthralled.

Great entry

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Menagerie Imagination , is well titled and a lot of fun to read. Yes, we can imagine a whole lot of zany things, and make them all safe, fun, and pleasant.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

Such a cute poem for children and adults who like to pretend just like the animals in your poem. This is why I want to live in my book, Jirvania! LOL

Loved this part in particular:

The farm animals stared

At this land they had made

They hoped they could live here

Wished they had stayed

They promised to visit

Said they'd come again

In their imagination

This land would remain



Forever and ever amen!
Thanks for sharing this delightful piece.
Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you liked that part in particular as it was the hardest part for me to write.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Love the rhyming and the subject is precious too. Rainbows and a land free for the horse, the cow and the duck. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.