The Two of Me
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Comment from January L'Angelle
I enjoyed this "time freeze" poem. I liked your rhymes. (dropped, plopped, stopped, popped) they were very good. I think that I would want to, if given the opportunity, be able to freeze time and go to a time in the past (or future) and see things differently as your poem shows. It was strong and poignant. I liked this very much. -January L.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed this "time freeze" poem. I liked your rhymes. (dropped, plopped, stopped, popped) they were very good. I think that I would want to, if given the opportunity, be able to freeze time and go to a time in the past (or future) and see things differently as your poem shows. It was strong and poignant. I liked this very much. -January L.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you Very Much for Your Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I like the meaning of this poem. I think it reads more like prose, though. The lines are very long. I think it would be easier to read if they were broken up a little.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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I like the meaning of this poem. I think it reads more like prose, though. The lines are very long. I think it would be easier to read if they were broken up a little.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thankful for Your Time to Read and Review this poem offering.
A rhyming prose type I suppose. Thanks again.
