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Drama

a 100 word story

17 total reviews 
Comment from humpwhistle
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A fun write, and a very solid effort for the 100-word dash. I like that you save the explanation of the quotes for your notes. I knew them all, except the last. I've been entertaining myself by coming up with other notable lines like, 'We're going to need a bigger boat', 'there's no fighting in the war room!'

Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Lee. This was fun.
Comment from Spitfire
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I love the idea of a drama class getting a new comer with a line from a play or a movie. Thanks for including the explanation in the author's notes. Chris will fit in well with the group with his answer.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Shari. A fun group here.
Comment from Mary Furlong
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As a theatre buff, I found this irresistible. The text alone was sufficient, but your author's notes made it truly accessible. Thanks for a great reading experience. As for the contest, break a leg.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
    Thank you very much, Mary, for the excellent review.
reply by Mary Furlong on 15-Jun-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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I like the drama and have enjoyed the dramatic taletelling in a dramatic mode; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
    Thanks, ALD
Comment from Megan3333
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This is really funny. I bet many people can relate to having there first kiss because of a play or musical role. I really like this story and it's really good.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Megan, for the positive, enthusiastic, and exceptional review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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What was that? The Twilight Saga, Vampires Diaries, Z Nation with a romantic quote thanks to Titanic. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
    You lost me, Iza, but thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from oliver818
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I like what you did here, it's really neat. I can really imagine students doing this. Your scene is lively and funny and I'm sure the new kid never expected to get kissed.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Oliver.