The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Gold Coffins "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We don't value our soul until it has been sold and then we realise how much we miss it and your words here are profound and honest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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We don't value our soul until it has been sold and then we realise how much we miss it and your words here are profound and honest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Thank you for Your Review and Continued Support. Since I was a bit sick last month I've been playing catch up. I Appreciate and Thank you for the review.
Comment from lyenochka
Well done Sapphonic Triad poem with a great quote from Bob Marley (and also from Jesus in Matt 16:26). I liked how you rhymed the quatrain of four syllables.
Question/Comment:
"Wisdom of Soul's Lost in their Haste!" (Souls) Feels like a plural is meant not the possessive here. Or perhaps Soul's is a contraction for "Soul is" ?
"When Soul's leave dirt ditches! " (Souls) really feels like a plural here.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Well done Sapphonic Triad poem with a great quote from Bob Marley (and also from Jesus in Matt 16:26). I liked how you rhymed the quatrain of four syllables.
Question/Comment:
"Wisdom of Soul's Lost in their Haste!" (Souls) Feels like a plural is meant not the possessive here. Or perhaps Soul's is a contraction for "Soul is" ?
"When Soul's leave dirt ditches! " (Souls) really feels like a plural here.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Thank you for Your Continued Support and Encouragement. The Soul's in this poem is meant as Multiple Souls of people I hope this was the correct punctuation?
Blessings to you.
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If you meant the plural, then no apostrophe would be needed.
