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When Eagles Soar

A Triolet

36 total reviews 
Comment from ameen786
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Whenever I read any Triolet, it reminds me of the late Gungalo on this site; this was the form she used quite often. Your poem is beautifully penned, with perfect, vivid description of this marvelous bird; our national bird; thanks for the treat.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Very many thanks for your review, ameen. I appreciate your time and kind words. I also remember Pam fondly. She was a wonderful poet. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from sunnilicious
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This poem came out beautifully. Well thought out. Clearly written. Nice visual imagery. Also, quite fitting for Memorial Day, but we're in different countries... Idk now. Nice work. God bless you :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    This is a lovely review, Alicia. Thank you so much for the six stars and your supportive comments. All the best, Tony
Comment from June Sargent
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Eagles are truly majestic creatures that were once endangered, but are making a comeback. They perfectly balance their power with grace, much like this poem. A nice example of a triolet.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Very many thanks for your review, June. I appreciate your time and kind words. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Not only do you give great descriptions of the soaring eagle, in your Triolet, but also of the effect that it has on the watcher.Both repeated lines work well to show the effect of the soaring eagle.Nicely done Tony,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 25-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Very many thanks for your review, Valda. I appreciate your comments and kind words. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"When Eagles Soar", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Very many thanks for your review, Duchess. I appreciate your time and kind words. All good wishes, Tony
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-May-2020

    Tony,
    as always, you're very welcome.
    God bless, take care and keep sharing!
    the Duchess
Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Blessings Tony. I enjoyed this triolet. I've always thought that although eagles fly with what seems to be such effortless ease, the fact is, that if they are in the air they are there for a purpose and that is to hunt! I think our Founding Fathers chose well when they chose the eagle as our national symbol instead of the turkey. LOL!

 Comment Written 24-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    Thank you, Frank. Noble birds, indeed. Without getting into any political discussion, you have your turkeys, too - as do we all! We just need to keep an eagle eye on them!
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading this poem. It is clear and concise. It is well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. I like the rhymes. Good. Interesting. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    Thanks, Raul. I appreciate your review
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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tfawcus: love your eagle poem. Great use of rhymes in your
triolet. Photo of my favorite bird is amazing! They fly over
the Des Moines River with such ease. They are powerful and
graceful. Have a wonderful weekend. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 24-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    Thank you from one eagle lover to another!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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This is a whimsical kind of poem that sets us thinking about the wondrous bird. The Eagle, the symbol of the USA, must be one of the strongest birds on Earth. When I think about it I wonder of its purpose.
Everything here has a purpose, yet I am not privy to all. I wish I knew more. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 24-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your review, Raffaelina. Some of the creatures on this earth are beyond our understanding.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Triolet about the eagles soaring and spread the light that always amazes us to look up and see an eagle soaring the skies while seeking for prey on the ground.

 Comment Written 24-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    As always, I appreciate your review Sandra. All good wishes, Tony