Sense of Heaven
Close your eyes...15 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is a lovely poem. I like the way you hint at everything here, nothing is concrete and yet it works really well. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is a lovely poem. I like the way you hint at everything here, nothing is concrete and yet it works really well. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply spiritual write filled with magic and angels to save us in our hour of need, the heeling energy came through your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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A deeply spiritual write filled with magic and angels to save us in our hour of need, the heeling energy came through your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from tfawcus
The imagination runs riot when we encourage it. Just the simple act of closing one's eyes can make us more keenly aware of our surroundings. Your poem describes it beautifully.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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The imagination runs riot when we encourage it. Just the simple act of closing one's eyes can make us more keenly aware of our surroundings. Your poem describes it beautifully.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from royowen
There's nothing wrong with what might bring you comfort a soft warm breeze can bring a shiver of delight which could well be an angel sent to bring comfort to a troubled soul, Jesus was comforted by an angel before his crucifixion, and when he fasted fo forty days, as was Elijah, well done, a fpgreat entry in this Naani contest, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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There's nothing wrong with what might bring you comfort a soft warm breeze can bring a shiver of delight which could well be an angel sent to bring comfort to a troubled soul, Jesus was comforted by an angel before his crucifixion, and when he fasted fo forty days, as was Elijah, well done, a fpgreat entry in this Naani contest, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you!
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Welcome
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is very well written. I really liked it, and it fits the format well also. Thanks for sharing this, and keep up the good work as well. No improvements to suggest here.
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reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is very well written. I really liked it, and it fits the format well also. Thanks for sharing this, and keep up the good work as well. No improvements to suggest here.
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Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you.
