The Naked Truth
Sometimes it's safer not to reveal too much.15 total reviews
Comment from suep
This is a great entry for the contest! Very creative and enjoyable to read. You have good alliteration here with 'h' and 'c'. Love your use of 'clothed mind.' Great presentation with the perfect picture choice and great title, too! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This is a great entry for the contest! Very creative and enjoyable to read. You have good alliteration here with 'h' and 'c'. Love your use of 'clothed mind.' Great presentation with the perfect picture choice and great title, too! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your generous review! Much appreciated.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has interesting metaphors within it. Someone the words seem cloaked with hidden meanings. The clothed mind could be a closed mind. I think I've caught many of your innuendos. I love word play, especially when it is so powerful. This is excellent. I have to give you A+ I meant to give you 6 points but now it won't let me....bwaaaa
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This has interesting metaphors within it. Someone the words seem cloaked with hidden meanings. The clothed mind could be a closed mind. I think I've caught many of your innuendos. I love word play, especially when it is so powerful. This is excellent. I have to give you A+ I meant to give you 6 points but now it won't let me....bwaaaa
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your virtual 6. You have picked up on the wordplay and double meaning - with not many words to play with I had to get as much in as possible!
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems to be a punny metaphor for hiding your problems for others.
It might be good to have some of them bared to take some strees away
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This seems to be a punny metaphor for hiding your problems for others.
It might be good to have some of them bared to take some strees away
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. My closet door needs to keep closed - there are too many embarrassing items in there!
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Don't mention it. We all have embarrassing moments.
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the
5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Lines connect grammatically and flow nicely. Beautiful presentation. I like the play on words with clothed mind.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the
5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Lines connect grammatically and flow nicely. Beautiful presentation. I like the play on words with clothed mind.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love the metaphorical relationship cues here... !! ;) A great offering for this limited format contest today! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Love the metaphorical relationship cues here... !! ;) A great offering for this limited format contest today! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you. I recognise your stylish entry and think it will win!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I really loved this, especially the last line. I think that did really well. I imagined someone with a lisp saying it. You have done well, and I can see why this is well received right now.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I really loved this, especially the last line. I think that did really well. I imagined someone with a lisp saying it. You have done well, and I can see why this is well received right now.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your affirming review.
Comment from richie b
Clever poem for your prompt.
Your use of the closet for hang-ups is light
hearted and works well. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Clever poem for your prompt.
Your use of the closet for hang-ups is light
hearted and works well. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you - I'm pleased my poem appealed to you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about withholding some information is sometimes in our best interest rather than showing all our cards too quickly.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about withholding some information is sometimes in our best interest rather than showing all our cards too quickly.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Yes, you caught the meaning of my poem exactly.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Her clothed mind is never safe; but your clothes are ever free on hangers in the closet; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Her clothed mind is never safe; but your clothes are ever free on hangers in the closet; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from tfawcus
Many of the clothes hanging in my closet should probably remain there or be quietly buried! I like your 'clothed mind' pun. 'Hang-ups', too, has a clever double meaning here. An amusing entry to the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Many of the clothes hanging in my closet should probably remain there or be quietly buried! I like your 'clothed mind' pun. 'Hang-ups', too, has a clever double meaning here. An amusing entry to the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Haha... my cupboard is bursting with embarrassing items, too.
Thanks for reviewing
