Whispered on the Winds of Change
Acrostic of a lifetime...52 total reviews
Comment from qinluo
Your still great poem .The sky , do him justice , the only informer of darkness .He wouldn't dispute with birds , gross , wind sound , never remember the youth and old . The time seems to be diagraded by him , and listen to the music from the blue .
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
  |
Your still great poem .The sky , do him justice , the only informer of darkness .He wouldn't dispute with birds , gross , wind sound , never remember the youth and old . The time seems to be diagraded by him , and listen to the music from the blue .
Comment Written 23-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
-
Thank you.
Comment from amada
I realize this poem was a labor of love. Your acrostic poem bring to life beautiful images. The lines of your work here calls for calm and reflection. My fave line: " Softly youth's dreams remind we're in arrears..."
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
|
I realize this poem was a labor of love. Your acrostic poem bring to life beautiful images. The lines of your work here calls for calm and reflection. My fave line: " Softly youth's dreams remind we're in arrears..."
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
-
Thanx much, amada, for your wonderful comments - so good to hear from you over here! ;) You're welcome to stop by the front porch here any time! ;) :) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face and have a great week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You expressed in passion this exciting poem. I really enjoyed the creativity that is not of this world. Exceptional presentation, well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
|
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You expressed in passion this exciting poem. I really enjoyed the creativity that is not of this world. Exceptional presentation, well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
-
Thanx much, my lady, for your wonderful comments - so good to hear from you over here! ;) You're welcome to stop by the front porch here any time! ;) :) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face and have a great week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
Wow! this certainly is an acrostic of or within a life time, it really deserves at least an 8 star vote as I think an extra 2 for presentation would be appropriate, " dandy nests fill then grow empty again" yes our young ones must leave to start their own stories, an excellent Acrostic very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
 |
Wow! this certainly is an acrostic of or within a life time, it really deserves at least an 8 star vote as I think an extra 2 for presentation would be appropriate, " dandy nests fill then grow empty again" yes our young ones must leave to start their own stories, an excellent Acrostic very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
-
Wow, kahpot -- thank you, THANK YOU for these awesome comments and that bonus 'plus' to top off the star stack! :) ;) It's turning out to be a great FIRST FULL WEEK of SUMMER round here - busier than I thought, but I'll take it over school work - lol!! ;) :) :) So glad you enjoyed my acrostic 'reflecting and reminiscing', sir, and thank you again for the stars!! :) Be sure enjoy some sun on your face and enjoy the week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
I really like this well written poem in a unique style with an excellent message. Thank God that the winds of change don't last and we can trust God's timing throughout the whole process. Winds blow on to a new and better season. Bill
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
|
I really like this well written poem in a unique style with an excellent message. Thank God that the winds of change don't last and we can trust God's timing throughout the whole process. Winds blow on to a new and better season. Bill
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
-
Wow, Bill -- thank you, THANK YOU for these awesome comments and that bonus 'plus' to top off the star stack! :) ;) It's turning out to be a great FIRST FULL WEEK of SUMMER round here - busier than I thought, but I'll take it over school work - lol!! ;) :) :) So glad you enjoyed my acrostic 'reflecting and reminiscing', sir, and thank you again for the stars!! :) Be sure enjoy some sun on your face and enjoy the week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
What an excellent acrostic, some massive thought processes here Yvette, yes indeed, it's not the dreams fulfilled or that sparkling trophy on the mantlepiece, they soon tarnish, and the dreams in time, but it's the eternal treasures that will last. Superbly written, you must be proud, well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
|
What an excellent acrostic, some massive thought processes here Yvette, yes indeed, it's not the dreams fulfilled or that sparkling trophy on the mantlepiece, they soon tarnish, and the dreams in time, but it's the eternal treasures that will last. Superbly written, you must be proud, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
-
And never stop looking for them, yeah?! ;) :) Thanx much, Roy, for your wonderful comments - good to hear from you this morning! ;) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face and have a great remainder of the week over there!! ;) Yvette
-
Bless you dear girl,
Comment from w.j.debi
I like how you bring us full circle from the dreams of youth, the realities of life, and back to realizing that we will always reach for the stars in one way or another.
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
|
I like how you bring us full circle from the dreams of youth, the realities of life, and back to realizing that we will always reach for the stars in one way or another.
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
-
Never stop reaching, yeah?! ;) :) Thanx much, W.J., for your wonderful comments - your support means a lot, my lady! ;) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face and have a great remainder of the week out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
I hear that Wal-Mart has that color on sale, Yvette. :) Life changes are in a vortex. We don't know if it happened before or if it happened at all. This is a good offering for the Acrostic Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
|
I hear that Wal-Mart has that color on sale, Yvette. :) Life changes are in a vortex. We don't know if it happened before or if it happened at all. This is a good offering for the Acrostic Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
-
LOL! I'll have to check that out, Jose!! ;) Thanx for stopping in on this one, sir, and have a wonderful rest of the week out there in Lone Star land! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I really liked how you set this out which made me pay attention to your words even more. I liked the message behind this poem that the world around us is always changing and that nothing is fixed. That's what your writing made me think when I read your line Eternity whispers that life's changes won't last. A really well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
|
I really liked how you set this out which made me pay attention to your words even more. I liked the message behind this poem that the world around us is always changing and that nothing is fixed. That's what your writing made me think when I read your line Eternity whispers that life's changes won't last. A really well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
-
Thanx much, Jacob, for your wonderful comments - so good to hear from you over here! ;) You're welcome to stop by the front porch here any time! ;) :) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face and have a great week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt acrostic about the lifetime stages of human beings from birth to death. A very detailed and specific lines to each stage of life we all go through our life time.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
|
A very well-written heartfelt acrostic about the lifetime stages of human beings from birth to death. A very detailed and specific lines to each stage of life we all go through our life time.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
-
Thanx much, Sandra, for your wonderful comments - always enjoy your insights, my lady!! ;) Be sure to enjoy some sun on your face over there on your side of the world and have a great week ahead!! ;) Yvette
