Reverence By The River
3-5-3 The view is slowly revealed.10 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Never thought of the river having a ghostly curtain. Interesting to think of the river mist as a ghostly curtain. This poem should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Never thought of the river having a ghostly curtain. Interesting to think of the river mist as a ghostly curtain. This poem should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ooooo.... such a cool yet eerie vision there...! ;) :) Such a unique and wonderful offering for the 3-5-3 this evening - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Ooooo.... such a cool yet eerie vision there...! ;) :) Such a unique and wonderful offering for the 3-5-3 this evening - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Lovely 3/5/3 poem entry for the contest. Good syllable count. I like the presentation. The lines connect grammatically and flow nicely. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Lovely 3/5/3 poem entry for the contest. Good syllable count. I like the presentation. The lines connect grammatically and flow nicely. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from royowen
This is a really good Lune poem in the form of 3/5/3. And I think this is a brilliant theme that speaks of a very ghostly, misty scene over the lake, well done, good luck blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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This is a really good Lune poem in the form of 3/5/3. And I think this is a brilliant theme that speaks of a very ghostly, misty scene over the lake, well done, good luck blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was a haunting poem, surprisingly so for such a short form. I loved the middle line. Very descriptive. You did a fantastic job here. I could see this one as a winner.
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This was a haunting poem, surprisingly so for such a short form. I loved the middle line. Very descriptive. You did a fantastic job here. I could see this one as a winner.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from Diana Kane
I always find these kinds of works so difficult for myself. This was very well done. It manages to have a reminiscent air about it maybe even a longing? Great job!
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I always find these kinds of works so difficult for myself. This was very well done. It manages to have a reminiscent air about it maybe even a longing? Great job!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from Mary Furlong
Very nicely done. A complete thought in just a few years. You almost didn't need an illustration for this one. Your words are worth 1000 pictures. Well, not really, but a bit of hyperbole never hurts. The picture is lovely by the way.
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Very nicely done. A complete thought in just a few years. You almost didn't need an illustration for this one. Your words are worth 1000 pictures. Well, not really, but a bit of hyperbole never hurts. The picture is lovely by the way.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from Ignatius Albright
Very nicely written. Short and simple, yet deeply thought-provoking. The only 'negative' is that it technically doesn't obey the syllable found of the prompt because the middle line has just 5 syllables. However this home is too brilliant to be caught up in pedantic technicalities.
Be proud!
I would like to become a fan if I'm not already after the contest!!
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Very nicely written. Short and simple, yet deeply thought-provoking. The only 'negative' is that it technically doesn't obey the syllable found of the prompt because the middle line has just 5 syllables. However this home is too brilliant to be caught up in pedantic technicalities.
Be proud!
I would like to become a fan if I'm not already after the contest!!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the mystique of the river and the unsettling mist that often occurs with temperature changes and you brought that atmospheric feeling into words here to chill us with a ghostly ambiance, love Dolly x
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You brought the mystique of the river and the unsettling mist that often occurs with temperature changes and you brought that atmospheric feeling into words here to chill us with a ghostly ambiance, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from tfawcus
What a miraculous revelation it is as the mists swirl away, revealing the glassy surface of the river below. The combination of your picture and your poem describes it perfectly.
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What a miraculous revelation it is as the mists swirl away, revealing the glassy surface of the river below. The combination of your picture and your poem describes it perfectly.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
