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A boy story

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Comment from Raul1
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This story is funny and hilarious. It made me laugh all through the ending of it. Congratulations on winning the contest! Much deserved. I like it. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-May-2020

reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review:) I am glad you like it
Comment from Bill Schott
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This phoneme intensive tale, A Boy Story, nears musical status as the happy lad and merry mom have a kooky dialogue and discuss, I guess the current situation. Bonkers.

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Mr. Bill
Comment from Jacob David Collins
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I enjoyed reading this. You captured just how curious children can be about the world and the things around them. I also liked your ending when the mother told her son not to spend all his time worrying and to enjoy life. A nicely written piece. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much for the good luck wishes.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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A delightful poem about a boy with lots of spirit and tons of curiosity. I love the picture you chose for this piece - Make some noise and be free as a bee - I love that his Mommy desires nothing but joy for him.

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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It's a cute story. The boy looked like he was filled with joy, as he excitedly spent time with his puppy. I looked at this poem, too and thought it looked like a challenge to write. You did a wonderful job.

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    thank you
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

You're absolutely right. This is a very, very silly story; it just doesn't make much sense at all. I don't know a thing about phonemes, but I like the sounds this makes as I read AND it sounded like you might have had a lot of fun writing this.

That's very cool. Ha

Thanks a bunch and good luck!

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    thank you so much
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is indeed a silly story, but it is also a very amusing one that made me laugh. i especially found
"Mom are friends compromising when realizing that there is no uprising coming this spring? We all are going to stay inside worldwide and hide."
amusing. It turns the tale so neatly on our current problems.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    thank you so much for your kind review
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a cute poem using many animals and things. The boy's conversation sounds real and believable, and the mommy ended the phonemes perfectly! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

reply by the author on 15-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your encouraging review and the good luck wishes:)
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 15-May-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from AJ McCall
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I like this poem because this reminds me how every toddler talks crazy, then refers to something you thought they wouldn't say. But I love the mother's reaction to his words: 'Go play...I'll always guide you with joy.'
Silly but understandable.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

reply by the author on 15-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review
reply by AJ McCall on 15-May-2020
    You're welcome!
Comment from Teri7
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I really like this story you have penned for the Phoneme challenge. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-May-2020

reply by the author on 15-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Teri:)