Little Red-haired Girl
a love poem15 total reviews
Comment from Puzzle
Ugh is this a true story?! This is so sad! I wonder why the little girl got sick and died! Or did I interpret this poem incorrectly? This is written well and I found no errors. It was sad though. I felt it.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Ugh is this a true story?! This is so sad! I wonder why the little girl got sick and died! Or did I interpret this poem incorrectly? This is written well and I found no errors. It was sad though. I felt it.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, P. We were six.
Comment from Kathleen S.
That's quite beautiful. First loves are often hard to forget. They have a special magic about them. Your poetry expresses that well. You can feel the love through your words. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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That's quite beautiful. First loves are often hard to forget. They have a special magic about them. Your poetry expresses that well. You can feel the love through your words. Well done.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, Kathleen
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Oh, wow. This sounds like a child's first love and first love lost. I remember my first crush/ first love. It took most of my life to get over it. To decide it was a figment of my mind and just me romanticizing a guy and that I really had NO IDEA what the guy was really like. hahaha
This brought back a LOT of memories. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Oh, wow. This sounds like a child's first love and first love lost. I remember my first crush/ first love. It took most of my life to get over it. To decide it was a figment of my mind and just me romanticizing a guy and that I really had NO IDEA what the guy was really like. hahaha
This brought back a LOT of memories. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, Robyn
Comment from Ogden
This is a very touching poem about a love of long ago, that had a tragic ending. My regretful impression is that it's autobiographical.
Ogden (Don)
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reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This is a very touching poem about a love of long ago, that had a tragic ending. My regretful impression is that it's autobiographical.
Ogden (Don)
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Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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We were six. Thank you for reviewing, Don
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You are very welcome.
Don
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow this is a profound write about someone you cared for and can still remember as it pains you still to have lost them, your words here are touching and brought a tear to my eye, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Wow this is a profound write about someone you cared for and can still remember as it pains you still to have lost them, your words here are touching and brought a tear to my eye, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly. We were six.
