Little Red-haired Girl
a love poem15 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
"Your memory still finds me" is a lovely opening line, as your poem traverses the sad memories of your first love, the little freckle-faced red haired girl. You shared your sandwich and your heart... you must have been a sensitive child.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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"Your memory still finds me" is a lovely opening line, as your poem traverses the sad memories of your first love, the little freckle-faced red haired girl. You shared your sandwich and your heart... you must have been a sensitive child.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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It?s one of my fondest memories.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Isn't it amazing how those 'loves of our youth' can still affect us so many decades along? This is a wonderful offering celebrating that connection - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Isn't it amazing how those 'loves of our youth' can still affect us so many decades along? This is a wonderful offering celebrating that connection - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you, Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Awe, this is cute, sweet, with a little romantic feel to it. I know that for just about everyone, their was a special someone whether it was reciprocal or not. I really like this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Awe, this is cute, sweet, with a little romantic feel to it. I know that for just about everyone, their was a special someone whether it was reciprocal or not. I really like this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thanks, Jeffrey
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, I too remember a person from decades ago. Memories, if they are good ones, can please us even at later dates. This is a good entry for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Yes, I too remember a person from decades ago. Memories, if they are good ones, can please us even at later dates. This is a good entry for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you, Rebecca
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a beautiful, moving poem. The tone is poetically bittersweet, and the brief story--brief like the life of the orange-haired girl--is memorable and sad.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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This is a beautiful, moving poem. The tone is poetically bittersweet, and the brief story--brief like the life of the orange-haired girl--is memorable and sad.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you, Janice
Comment from Drew Delaney
What a sad poem! It really is heartfelt. I like the imagery of the speckled face and red hair. The sandwich that was shared and the emptiness felt because of her not returning to school due to sickness. Best wishes!
Drew
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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What a sad poem! It really is heartfelt. I like the imagery of the speckled face and red hair. The sandwich that was shared and the emptiness felt because of her not returning to school due to sickness. Best wishes!
Drew
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you, Drew
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful love poem for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not writing contest. You did a great job with the poem and the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful love poem for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not writing contest. You did a great job with the poem and the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from Elon Vaughn
So sad. My baby sister was a little red haired girl, with spun gold tips. We loved it when she said,"Did you hear that? Wook at that wed head." I'm sorry that it sounds like she did not survive the year for some reason. Your story sounds true.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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So sad. My baby sister was a little red haired girl, with spun gold tips. We loved it when she said,"Did you hear that? Wook at that wed head." I'm sorry that it sounds like she did not survive the year for some reason. Your story sounds true.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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We were six.
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First true love, lasts a long time.
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a sad love story. It is well written because it evokes a lot of emotion in the reader. We all have someone that we have longed for over the years and this is a reminder of that love. Well penned poem. -January L.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This is a sad love story. It is well written because it evokes a lot of emotion in the reader. We all have someone that we have longed for over the years and this is a reminder of that love. Well penned poem. -January L.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, January
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a lover that goes before us that we find difficult to forget when they were a lifetime part of our lives. After years, we can still remember every little detail about them.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about a lover that goes before us that we find difficult to forget when they were a lifetime part of our lives. After years, we can still remember every little detail about them.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for giving this a look.
