World Sleeps
A Trinet Poem10 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your Trinet poem and I rate it 10 stars. I ran out of 6, but it is 10 stars by far. Your thoughts are beautifully expressed and your poem demanded my attention from beginning to end. It was well received and I agree with your every emotion. Best wishes
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I enjoyed reading your Trinet poem and I rate it 10 stars. I ran out of 6, but it is 10 stars by far. Your thoughts are beautifully expressed and your poem demanded my attention from beginning to end. It was well received and I agree with your every emotion. Best wishes
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much, it was fun trying this form
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Trinet Poem
World Sleeps
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. The coronavirus and the sense of being trapped at home is something we can all relate to. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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A Trinet Poem
World Sleeps
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. The coronavirus and the sense of being trapped at home is something we can all relate to. Well done.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It does appear that the world sleeps. The air quality is better in many places right now because of the inactivity. I think that animals are roaming closer to and into cities because of the inactivity and silence. I like the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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It does appear that the world sleeps. The air quality is better in many places right now because of the inactivity. I think that animals are roaming closer to and into cities because of the inactivity and silence. I like the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much and yes sleep does seem easier
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
The pandemic has certainly changed the way people think and react nowadays. There is now too much on what you cannot do, and what you must do to survive. Good poem!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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The pandemic has certainly changed the way people think and react nowadays. There is now too much on what you cannot do, and what you must do to survive. Good poem!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much and yes reactions are quite different
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
So this is called a trinet!. It looks not very simple, but indeed fun to try your hand. I must try one myself someday.
You did a very good job. Used an actual theme which worked very well with this special form. The two short lines, followed by two long ones, and then three short. Repeated in three couplets. Interesting!
I liked it.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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So this is called a trinet!. It looks not very simple, but indeed fun to try your hand. I must try one myself someday.
You did a very good job. Used an actual theme which worked very well with this special form. The two short lines, followed by two long ones, and then three short. Repeated in three couplets. Interesting!
I liked it.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, yes it was fun and challenging to have a go
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Comment from Elon Vaughn
This is a dramatic piece, describing these trying and unusual times. I appreciate the brevity of words including images and thoughts which convey much more. I also like the illustration choice.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This is a dramatic piece, describing these trying and unusual times. I appreciate the brevity of words including images and thoughts which convey much more. I also like the illustration choice.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
She may seem asleep, but the restless is growing 'neath the covers... ;) :) Thanx so much for such a masterfully written Trinet -- the rhyme and the shape make for a lovely offering that will be hard to beat!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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She may seem asleep, but the restless is growing 'neath the covers... ;) :) Thanx so much for such a masterfully written Trinet -- the rhyme and the shape make for a lovely offering that will be hard to beat!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you so very much, it is a great form to try
Comment from Cindy Decker
Kahpot,
I really like your trinet poem.
Your rhyme flows; and, I like your poem's sound strength the end of each stanza.
Excellent poem and photo.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Cindy
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Kahpot,
I really like your trinet poem.
Your rhyme flows; and, I like your poem's sound strength the end of each stanza.
Excellent poem and photo.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Cindy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much-from blind author
Comment from RodG
This Trinet is a solid entry in this contest. Your first stanza describes succinctly the status of most of us because of Corona; stanza two describes how we cope while stanza three focuses on our hopes for the future. Although I find the rhyming heavy-handed, I like the content a lot. Rod
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This Trinet is a solid entry in this contest. Your first stanza describes succinctly the status of most of us because of Corona; stanza two describes how we cope while stanza three focuses on our hopes for the future. Although I find the rhyming heavy-handed, I like the content a lot. Rod
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, and yes I was unsure about the rhyme, your comments are very helpful
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Trinet and summary of our current situation of isolation where we may only go out of our homes to buy the absolute necessary items like food and medication.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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A very well-written Trinet and summary of our current situation of isolation where we may only go out of our homes to buy the absolute necessary items like food and medication.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much
