St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "St. Louis Chapter 26 part 2"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
15 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha! Mac is 'open', huh? Nah, not at all.
Barbara, I love your characters,and the plot is rich. I've been having technical difficulties, and there's no way to get things fixed,so I'm not here a lot right now, but this was great!
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Ha! Mac is 'open', huh? Nah, not at all.
Barbara, I love your characters,and the plot is rich. I've been having technical difficulties, and there's no way to get things fixed,so I'm not here a lot right now, but this was great!
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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I am so sorry you have to read this with no money attached, but I really appreciate it that you did. Thank you. I am sorry to hear about your technical difficulties.
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No worries.My pleasure.
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
I don't know. This copy looked awfully clean. Maybe double-duty is good for you. Ha
This was good stuff. I like her being so guarded -- but make sure that's showing up throughout and not just here, where you're focusing on it. Know what I mean?? I don't remember really getting that sense from her for a long time now...
Thanks -- enjoyed!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Barbara,
I don't know. This copy looked awfully clean. Maybe double-duty is good for you. Ha
This was good stuff. I like her being so guarded -- but make sure that's showing up throughout and not just here, where you're focusing on it. Know what I mean?? I don't remember really getting that sense from her for a long time now...
Thanks -- enjoyed!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I will make sure it shows. I think, or I hope, it's gradually showing up, to finally burst out. Thank you.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed this chapter in your story as they continue their relationship. I like how you address the real life affects of her past so that it's hard for her to trust someone. The guy does a great job of being patient with her. Good luck with your social distancing teaching. Bill
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed this chapter in your story as they continue their relationship. I like how you address the real life affects of her past so that it's hard for her to trust someone. The guy does a great job of being patient with her. Good luck with your social distancing teaching. Bill
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and stay safe.
Comment from SLMorrical
I haven't been on here for a while, and I can still read your post and know the story. As always and wonderful edition. I can see the bond between Mac and Logan getting stronger. Mac as usual is trying to keep her feelings to herself. I am looking forward to when the book is published and I can read it from cover to cover. I hope you are staying safe with this virus. I am on the front lines being a Nurse one reason I have not been on here for a while. Very good, flows well and is easy to follow.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I haven't been on here for a while, and I can still read your post and know the story. As always and wonderful edition. I can see the bond between Mac and Logan getting stronger. Mac as usual is trying to keep her feelings to herself. I am looking forward to when the book is published and I can read it from cover to cover. I hope you are staying safe with this virus. I am on the front lines being a Nurse one reason I have not been on here for a while. Very good, flows well and is easy to follow.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and please stay safe as a nurse. All of the front line workers are in my prayers.
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poor Edger, he's certainly going through it. I like that he barks to be let out when the need takes hold! I'm wondering who on earth it is that is doing this to Mac, and how awful to have a death threat painted on your desk! This was a really good part, Barbara, and I really enjoyed reading it. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Poor Edger, he's certainly going through it. I like that he barks to be let out when the need takes hold! I'm wondering who on earth it is that is doing this to Mac, and how awful to have a death threat painted on your desk! This was a really good part, Barbara, and I really enjoyed reading it. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Another great chapter in the book St. Louis. Too quickly I come to the end. I feel like I am in the midst of a long movie, that I only get snippets of every now and then. I'm waiting on the next posting!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Another great chapter in the book St. Louis. Too quickly I come to the end. I feel like I am in the midst of a long movie, that I only get snippets of every now and then. I'm waiting on the next posting!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I know it's hard to get about 80,000 words all out a once. LOL Thank you for sticking with me.
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Wow! 80,000 words! A little here, a little there and you'll have it all one day.
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Yes, I try to post about 1,000 at a time. I'm afraid more than that would not get read on FS,
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You're probably right.
Comment from BethShelby
This is well written. I don't see any editing problems. You do much better than me. You're writing always leaves me wanting more. I am surprised she didn't react much at seeing the writing on the desk. I 'm also surprised they only found one bug.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This is well written. I don't see any editing problems. You do much better than me. You're writing always leaves me wanting more. I am surprised she didn't react much at seeing the writing on the desk. I 'm also surprised they only found one bug.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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McKenzie is on the verge of a major melt down. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great job and I want more, more and more right now. I'm the impatient type can you tell. Very easy reading and I didn't see any errors. Stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Great job and I want more, more and more right now. I'm the impatient type can you tell. Very easy reading and I didn't see any errors. Stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
It seems that the threats to Mac never stop. Now Edger has been tranquilized, the crime notes have been shattered, there's a threatening note, and a bug is found. That's enough to cause major stress. You know, I would have liked to have been in on that interview with Mrs. Whitmore. I thought you might have included just a brief scene. letting us know if she had any information that would help solve the case. Mac is loosening up a bit, and Logan senses. that, I believe. Great chapter. judi
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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It seems that the threats to Mac never stop. Now Edger has been tranquilized, the crime notes have been shattered, there's a threatening note, and a bug is found. That's enough to cause major stress. You know, I would have liked to have been in on that interview with Mrs. Whitmore. I thought you might have included just a brief scene. letting us know if she had any information that would help solve the case. Mac is loosening up a bit, and Logan senses. that, I believe. Great chapter. judi
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Mrs. Whitmore had nothing to do with this case. It's just the strip joint scenes where McKenzie and Logan got closer. That's the only reason it was in the story. So there was no more reason for it to be there. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. That does make sense. judi
Comment from Ben Colder
Its getting there . Oops! I hear wedding bells in the distance but we need to solve this murder. Wow! A death threat. Maybe they are close to solving this thing. Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Its getting there . Oops! I hear wedding bells in the distance but we need to solve this murder. Wow! A death threat. Maybe they are close to solving this thing. Good one Barb.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
