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Comment from MAMONIA
Truth is definitely in this piece. I find you have given some of our wisdom as false or foolish. When is it we find the real wisdom that we seek?
You have certainly voiced your opinion, and as I see and experience this poem,
Truth cannot emerge without the sun, the true test of man's wisdom.
Very enjoyable. Look forward to reading more of your works.
Marie
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Truth is definitely in this piece. I find you have given some of our wisdom as false or foolish. When is it we find the real wisdom that we seek?
You have certainly voiced your opinion, and as I see and experience this poem,
Truth cannot emerge without the sun, the true test of man's wisdom.
Very enjoyable. Look forward to reading more of your works.
Marie
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like Godly wisdom when one receives it, His word is light to one's path and beacon for one's life. I have depended on God's wisdom, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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There's nothing like Godly wisdom when one receives it, His word is light to one's path and beacon for one's life. I have depended on God's wisdom, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are deep, interesting, strong and creative. Thank
you for the phrase under the title of this poem. As I pondered on the words of this poem, the phrase helped me see the true meaning of these
words. The artwork compliments this poem. Hope you are well.....Maria
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The author's words are deep, interesting, strong and creative. Thank
you for the phrase under the title of this poem. As I pondered on the words of this poem, the phrase helped me see the true meaning of these
words. The artwork compliments this poem. Hope you are well.....Maria
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I love this poem. Considering the strict pattern it follows with the scheme it conveys so much. I think it is a wonderful and thought-provoking poem on the very deepest level. Well done and congratulations on an excellent poem with a brilliant message kindest regards Meia x
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I love this poem. Considering the strict pattern it follows with the scheme it conveys so much. I think it is a wonderful and thought-provoking poem on the very deepest level. Well done and congratulations on an excellent poem with a brilliant message kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
like always I like your deep and profound words of wisdom. I liked the format here and love the alliteration at the end fake fables fade, fall, faint fast
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like always I like your deep and profound words of wisdom. I liked the format here and love the alliteration at the end fake fables fade, fall, faint fast
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Stunning alliteration in SSSSSSS and FFFFFFF--seven of each!--quite impressive in such a short poem. Powerful imagery in well chosen words. The opening line is startling.
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Stunning alliteration in SSSSSSS and FFFFFFF--seven of each!--quite impressive in such a short poem. Powerful imagery in well chosen words. The opening line is startling.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Alcreator:
This 5-7-5-7-7 poem reminds us that the things of this world are both fake and temporary while the things of the eternal world are both true and eternal. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
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Alcreator:
This 5-7-5-7-7 poem reminds us that the things of this world are both fake and temporary while the things of the eternal world are both true and eternal. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is a very nice poem that I can understand well. I especially like the alliteration in the third line and also in the last line. It has a great flow to it, and the words just drip off the tongue.
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This is a very nice poem that I can understand well. I especially like the alliteration in the third line and also in the last line. It has a great flow to it, and the words just drip off the tongue.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Fake news like that spread across Facebook, Instagram, and everywhere else bursts on the scene, spreads rapidly, and then it is replaced by another boosted idea. Foolish people latch on as if it is gospel...when only the true, honest word comes from our Lord...his words never fade away. smiles, Carol
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Fake news like that spread across Facebook, Instagram, and everywhere else bursts on the scene, spreads rapidly, and then it is replaced by another boosted idea. Foolish people latch on as if it is gospel...when only the true, honest word comes from our Lord...his words never fade away. smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
I thought you did a great job using alliteration to strengthen this piece and I liked the choice of vocabulary. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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I thought you did a great job using alliteration to strengthen this piece and I liked the choice of vocabulary. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
