I waited too long
The truth remains buried now7 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
VERY nice. very sad, but well written. You nailed the format and put longing and regret into 17 syllables. I know that's not the easiest assignment in the world.
Blessings, peace and health,
Deb
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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VERY nice. very sad, but well written. You nailed the format and put longing and regret into 17 syllables. I know that's not the easiest assignment in the world.
Blessings, peace and health,
Deb
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Jen
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I love your review Deb. Thank you. Jen
Comment from victor 66
I'm a firm believer in finding out from people that are important to me what their thoughts are, especially when it has to do with emotion and love. Sometimes you don't get the answer you wanted but you're still better off knowing. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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I'm a firm believer in finding out from people that are important to me what their thoughts are, especially when it has to do with emotion and love. Sometimes you don't get the answer you wanted but you're still better off knowing. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thanks Victor.
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You're welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Agreed:) sometimes when you wait too long to say the proper words -
There was never a right time
and now it's too late ... . Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Agreed:) sometimes when you wait too long to say the proper words -
There was never a right time
and now it's too late ... . Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Ma y thanks. Iza.
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very powerful poem. This could mean so much to so many people. We want to think that it's never to late to speak up, but that's not always true. Well done. I enjoyed your poem. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This is a very powerful poem. This could mean so much to so many people. We want to think that it's never to late to speak up, but that's not always true. Well done. I enjoyed your poem. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Many thanks January
Comment from samandlancelot
Regret is a strong emotion you have captured well in your senryu poem. Every wrong time could be a lost opportunity that you will never regain.
I love the picture you've paired with your poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Regret is a strong emotion you have captured well in your senryu poem. Every wrong time could be a lost opportunity that you will never regain.
I love the picture you've paired with your poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Many thanks Patricia
Comment from Drew Delaney
OoooH, I like that. Isn't that the way it is? We wait for the right time and even the right moment only to find out we waited too long. Very nicely written! Stay safe!
Drew
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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OoooH, I like that. Isn't that the way it is? We wait for the right time and even the right moment only to find out we waited too long. Very nicely written! Stay safe!
Drew
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Many thanks Drew
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful Senryu poem you wrote. Beautiful artwork. great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi there A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful Senryu poem you wrote. Beautiful artwork. great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you.
