Epitaph For Mack, the Gas Man
He was the gas supply maintenance man.9 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's just not right, poor chap. The gas man passes gas that ignites and leads to his unexpected demise. Well played! Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
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That's just not right, poor chap. The gas man passes gas that ignites and leads to his unexpected demise. Well played! Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Epitaph For Mack, the Gas Man
Hello my friend
Heh heh heh...this is a funny poem great entry for the Witty Epitaph writing prompt. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
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Epitaph For Mack, the Gas Man
Hello my friend
Heh heh heh...this is a funny poem great entry for the Witty Epitaph writing prompt. I like the presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
A rather witty and funny little poem. I think the picture and poem work well together. You've done a good job of writing an epitaph. Good luck in the contest.
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A rather witty and funny little poem. I think the picture and poem work well together. You've done a good job of writing an epitaph. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
Lolz... Oh my God
He really did explode. This is nice, I like it. The image is lovely too and the content is quite okay. Thanks for sharing.
Well done
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Lolz... Oh my God
He really did explode. This is nice, I like it. The image is lovely too and the content is quite okay. Thanks for sharing.
Well done
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very witty Epitaph you have penned about Mack and his gas attack. You used very cute and humorous words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very cute and very witty Epitaph you have penned about Mack and his gas attack. You used very cute and humorous words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Oh my gosh! Poor Mack the gas man! Sometimes it just happens, and the gas blows out unwanted. But if we are, at the same time, have a gas meter checked...blown to bits, that must have been quite an explosion!
Very nice.
Made me giggle.
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Oh my gosh! Poor Mack the gas man! Sometimes it just happens, and the gas blows out unwanted. But if we are, at the same time, have a gas meter checked...blown to bits, that must have been quite an explosion!
Very nice.
Made me giggle.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Rhymer
Your poem - rhyme, is a great way to9 poke fun at a subject/topic which many cannot understand. I'm frequently told I possess a warpe4d sense of humour. Better that I say, than none! I have written a number along - though generally use the Limerick format - some can be very naughty too! Lol. I can visualise the "has bean?" effect. Well done. It livens up my day. Ciao and stay safe. Rhymer.
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Your poem - rhyme, is a great way to9 poke fun at a subject/topic which many cannot understand. I'm frequently told I possess a warpe4d sense of humour. Better that I say, than none! I have written a number along - though generally use the Limerick format - some can be very naughty too! Lol. I can visualise the "has bean?" effect. Well done. It livens up my day. Ciao and stay safe. Rhymer.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Anya Trofimova
This is wonderful - it reads like a Roald Dahl poem for children! I love the clever rhyme scheme, which gives wit and flow to your piece. Good luck in the contest!
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This is wonderful - it reads like a Roald Dahl poem for children! I love the clever rhyme scheme, which gives wit and flow to your piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Witty indeed and I have no other words to add, your entry is perfect and the subject you choose is blowing up my mind:) "We couldn't bury our mate, Mack.
This is how he did expire:
While checking the meter
his beans did a repeater --
then his bum caught on fire
and he blew to bits in a gas attack."
Thank you fro sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Witty indeed and I have no other words to add, your entry is perfect and the subject you choose is blowing up my mind:) "We couldn't bury our mate, Mack.
This is how he did expire:
While checking the meter
his beans did a repeater --
then his bum caught on fire
and he blew to bits in a gas attack."
Thank you fro sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
