Withdrawal
a 50-word story16 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
This fifty-word story ends with a cleverly humorous twist.
I'm assuming a bandanna perhaps?
Very entertaining!
Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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This fifty-word story ends with a cleverly humorous twist.
I'm assuming a bandanna perhaps?
Very entertaining!
Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Rich, for taking a look.
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My pleasure, you're welcome.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Ha ha Perfect entry for this day and age! You should do well in the Humorous 50 Word Story contest. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Ha ha Perfect entry for this day and age! You should do well in the Humorous 50 Word Story contest. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, TT
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Quite all right.
Comment from RodG
This story is so good because of the misdirection. Set TODAY the reader thinks of all the precautions these two people need to take to go anywhere. One does not suspect they are robbing a bank (which will be closed, of course, like mine is). This did make me chuckle and should do very well in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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This story is so good because of the misdirection. Set TODAY the reader thinks of all the precautions these two people need to take to go anywhere. One does not suspect they are robbing a bank (which will be closed, of course, like mine is). This did make me chuckle and should do very well in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Rod, for the encouraging review.
Comment from LisaMay
Haha... you must have read my mind. I was just joking with a friend this afternoon that this mask business might put ideas into people's heads.
You've written the scenario really well. Snappy dialogue.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Haha... you must have read my mind. I was just joking with a friend this afternoon that this mask business might put ideas into people's heads.
You've written the scenario really well. Snappy dialogue.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, LisaMay
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
This is humorous. I didn't see it coming that the husband was actually going to rob the bank..lolz. I really enjoyed it a lot. Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Well done
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This is humorous. I didn't see it coming that the husband was actually going to rob the bank..lolz. I really enjoyed it a lot. Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Well done
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Opeyemi
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You're welcome
Comment from jenintorre
Ha ha ha. This is a great 50 word story. It really made me laugh. I think it should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Ha ha ha. This is a great 50 word story. It really made me laugh. I think it should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Jen
