Fairer Weather
I'm waiting for the sun to warm me4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Michael, This is a very nice poem you have penned about waiting for the sun to warm you. You used very good descriptive words and very interesting and happy picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Do you still have your little dog? He is the cutest little dog. I hope all is well with you my friend. May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Michael, This is a very nice poem you have penned about waiting for the sun to warm you. You used very good descriptive words and very interesting and happy picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Do you still have your little dog? He is the cutest little dog. I hope all is well with you my friend. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your kind review Teri. Sadly our little Jack Russell, Harry died three years ago. He was only six, but had been developing cancer that we knew nothing about. He had a very quick but gentle exit from this world. We keep his photographs around the house and his memory will always be cherished. Thank you so much for asking! I hope you are managing to keep a suitably low profile and are coping with current restrictions as well as possible. Warmest wishes from Michael.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have been waiting for the sun to warm you, as the patients who are waiting in the distance you think they wish to join you how joyous you feel in the room; well said.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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You have been waiting for the sun to warm you, as the patients who are waiting in the distance you think they wish to join you how joyous you feel in the room; well said.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem which is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think a lot of people can relate to this right now with the quarantines! I think you did a great job of sharing how you are feeling. The rhyme was excellent - each word choice "Fits" perfectly. The image that goes with this is perfect for this poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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I think a lot of people can relate to this right now with the quarantines! I think you did a great job of sharing how you are feeling. The rhyme was excellent - each word choice "Fits" perfectly. The image that goes with this is perfect for this poem. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful appraisal of my poem which gently reflects upon the current situation we all find ourselves in. Very best of wishes to you.
Comment from RodG
What a great attitude the Speaker has as he awaits the joys of better weather. I especially like his generous nature, that he wishes to SHARE with others all these pleasures. So pleased you chose ABCB rhyming too. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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What a great attitude the Speaker has as he awaits the joys of better weather. I especially like his generous nature, that he wishes to SHARE with others all these pleasures. So pleased you chose ABCB rhyming too. Rod
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful appraisal of my poem. Very best wishes to from Michael.
