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Comment from Debbie Pope
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Thank you for this lovely poem with its vibrant colors. Spring is definitely getting overlooked this year, and it has so much inspiration to offer, particularly this year. Your tulips are gorgeous.
I hope you are doing well and staying safe.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thanks Debbie, I really appreciate your support. Like others I?m stressed right out - too many irons in the fire. My fan story reviewing and writing has been greatly curtailed but stress is Parkinson?s great symptom devil. Take care and stay caring and safe
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I noticed the blossoms in the trees and you are so right, despite the virus terror, there is beauty starting to shine through. This is perfectly done 5-7-5-7-7

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Yes, joy can be uncovered in many places/situations. Thanks for a great review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zanya
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Here are sentiments to help us keep Hope alive as we muddle through this 'virus strife' how lucky we are that we looking forward to Spring and not the dark days of winter -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Yes, joy can be uncovered in many places/situations. Thanks for a great review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great image, Trisha,
and I like the presentation, too.
-You have written a good tanka.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you announce the
arrival of spring, and the
pivot line is very good.
-A good ending with
a positive message about enjoying spring.
-One small thing: Its colors
-Thanks for sharing this, and
have a great day and week ahead.
-Hope you are doing well.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    I changed the color, any better? Be safe and thanks for your usual positive review,
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Apr-2020
    You are welcome, Trisha. I didn't mean the background color. That was fine. You wrote It's color [It's needs to be Its]. Sorry it was confusing.