My Busy Life of Variety
Biographical poem11 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
Nice poem! I possess some of the qualities you write about in your poem: I like quiet and I like my own company. I like your rhyming, the way it is staggered(irregular) and refreshing. Really good work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Nice poem! I possess some of the qualities you write about in your poem: I like quiet and I like my own company. I like your rhyming, the way it is staggered(irregular) and refreshing. Really good work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review comments. i am actually quite enjoying withdrawing from the world for a while.
Comment from Praveen J.
I certainly like the rhyme but more than that I appreciate the insight into your life. I'm searching for the courage and inspiration to live through these dark days. That line on Automatic and static, may well describe me :(
But I'm feeling energized by your poem....so job well done Lisa !
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I certainly like the rhyme but more than that I appreciate the insight into your life. I'm searching for the courage and inspiration to live through these dark days. That line on Automatic and static, may well describe me :(
But I'm feeling energized by your poem....so job well done Lisa !
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your bio piece is so creatively and skillfully composed--and vividly descriptive, with numerous specific details that flow together to complete the delightful character sketch of an active, exuberant person.
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Your bio piece is so creatively and skillfully composed--and vividly descriptive, with numerous specific details that flow together to complete the delightful character sketch of an active, exuberant person.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from Minglement
What great entry for the Bio contest. I love that it gives the reader a true sense of who you are and what you love :) You show yourself as well rounded and giving. Someone I'd be happy to call a friend :) Good luck in the contest.
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What great entry for the Bio contest. I love that it gives the reader a true sense of who you are and what you love :) You show yourself as well rounded and giving. Someone I'd be happy to call a friend :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Glimpses, level and stand of your confidence, leading the way, never quitting, telling your vigour, strength, power and passion for living, so depicted your bio; well said.
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Glimpses, level and stand of your confidence, leading the way, never quitting, telling your vigour, strength, power and passion for living, so depicted your bio; well said.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from QC Poet
Seems like a all around decient enough perspective and personality. The only noticeable thing missing in the posting is the spiritual aspect to this joy, which probably also a driving force. Good Luck entry in this Bio prompt. Blessings to you and Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and Insight.
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Seems like a all around decient enough perspective and personality. The only noticeable thing missing in the posting is the spiritual aspect to this joy, which probably also a driving force. Good Luck entry in this Bio prompt. Blessings to you and Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and Insight.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from DeboraDyess
A good look into you! Lots of energy; I like that. I've always said that my LEAST favorit Bible verse is the one that says 'be still and know ...' Sit still? Really? Yikes! lol
I'll enjoy each stage; turn the page; forget my age.>> Love this line!
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I drink craft beer; I volunteer; I change my own gear -->> Not a fan of craft beer, but i like the line for the 'I maeke my own gear' part. I get that compoletely.
I don't live life on automatic, or generate white-noise static.>> Great line
Blah blah won't go far with me -- I prefer my own company.>>In a world of blah, blah, blah...Not easy!
I don't like out and loud in a heaving crowd.
(I'm pleased now that it's not allowed.)>>Shame, shame! lol
I use my wit just a little bit; I never quit;>> GOOD quality!
and if you need a team player,
I'm the answer to your prayer.>> Another good line
WOW! There was a lot there. Some of the rhymes felt forced. (ex. Cheese, breeze, itty pity) but I think that was purposed. I like the boi!
Good job! Is this a contest enry? I think I saw that...Best to you!
Blessings and be safe,
Deb
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A good look into you! Lots of energy; I like that. I've always said that my LEAST favorit Bible verse is the one that says 'be still and know ...' Sit still? Really? Yikes! lol
I'll enjoy each stage; turn the page; forget my age.>> Love this line!
I
I drink craft beer; I volunteer; I change my own gear -->> Not a fan of craft beer, but i like the line for the 'I maeke my own gear' part. I get that compoletely.
I don't live life on automatic, or generate white-noise static.>> Great line
Blah blah won't go far with me -- I prefer my own company.>>In a world of blah, blah, blah...Not easy!
I don't like out and loud in a heaving crowd.
(I'm pleased now that it's not allowed.)>>Shame, shame! lol
I use my wit just a little bit; I never quit;>> GOOD quality!
and if you need a team player,
I'm the answer to your prayer.>> Another good line
WOW! There was a lot there. Some of the rhymes felt forced. (ex. Cheese, breeze, itty pity) but I think that was purposed. I like the boi!
Good job! Is this a contest enry? I think I saw that...Best to you!
Blessings and be safe,
Deb
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from VanessaDanRun
Thank you for sharing! I am the same way for sure! I love going places but I tend to do them alone lol. It's being social without being social if that makes sense. Too bad we can't go anywhere during this quarantine! Thank you again!
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Thank you for sharing! I am the same way for sure! I love going places but I tend to do them alone lol. It's being social without being social if that makes sense. Too bad we can't go anywhere during this quarantine! Thank you again!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from RodG
This is a very good Bio entry because (1) it gives us a very lengthy but varied picture of the kind of person you are--one who tries new things, enjoys his own company, and can tenderly adopt a cat; (2) it utilizes internal rhyme very well. Rod
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This is a very good Bio entry because (1) it gives us a very lengthy but varied picture of the kind of person you are--one who tries new things, enjoys his own company, and can tenderly adopt a cat; (2) it utilizes internal rhyme very well. Rod
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
You have masterfully conformed to the Bio-writing prompt with this light and breezy offering. I found it solidly rhymed, internally as well. Very clearly presented message, throughout.
Exceptionally written overall!
A very promising contest entry, best wishes.
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You have masterfully conformed to the Bio-writing prompt with this light and breezy offering. I found it solidly rhymed, internally as well. Very clearly presented message, throughout.
Exceptionally written overall!
A very promising contest entry, best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
