The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Tik-Tok"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
10 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I did not realize that you were near Quebec...is the virus populated there? It's everywhere. I wish it would stop. Pray for the ventilators to give oxygen and breathe to the many patients who need it.
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I did not realize that you were near Quebec...is the virus populated there? It's everywhere. I wish it would stop. Pray for the ventilators to give oxygen and breathe to the many patients who need it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from LisaMay
I like how you are coping by having beer and dancing with the kitties. If we didn't laugh we'd cry, so i think your way of writing is very entertaining. It has several spelling and style errors that others may have pointed out, but these don't bother me because it is not a work of literature, it is a personal home journal and it suits it to feel more relaxed in expression.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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I like how you are coping by having beer and dancing with the kitties. If we didn't laugh we'd cry, so i think your way of writing is very entertaining. It has several spelling and style errors that others may have pointed out, but these don't bother me because it is not a work of literature, it is a personal home journal and it suits it to feel more relaxed in expression.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi LisaMay, sorry for my grammar, English is my third language is far from perfection:) Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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I admire people who can speak and write in other languages! I do not know any other languages - down here in New Zealand is a long way away from non-English speaking countries.
Comment from Spitfire
The numbers game! I laugh. When you consider the population count it's probably one out of a thousand who are affected. I like to think that God has a hand in this and chose his victims as though who earned bad karma in the past.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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The numbers game! I laugh. When you consider the population count it's probably one out of a thousand who are affected. I like to think that God has a hand in this and chose his victims as though who earned bad karma in the past.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Yes you are so right, but what can I do, is so tempting to take a pick at the numbers.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with this journal entry. I found it to be funny and true and sarcastic and sad all at the same time. I like the approach you are taking to covid-19. Your words are descriptive and flow well. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
hobbit--habit
dyeing--dying
Here goes his lost breathe---last breath
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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You did a good job with this journal entry. I found it to be funny and true and sarcastic and sad all at the same time. I like the approach you are taking to covid-19. Your words are descriptive and flow well. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
hobbit--habit
dyeing--dying
Here goes his lost breathe---last breath
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Jan, as usual you are the best. Thank you for reading and for your honest feedback
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Stop freaking out and stop watching numbers.... they are not always acccurate... ;) Thanx for sharing, Iza - get some fresh air! :) Yvette
working 8 hour on --> working 8 hours on
family my kitties --> family! My kitties
"girl" and it's hiding his edible --> "girl" and is hiding his snacks
Honestly I prefer to see him drinking a beer, --> Honestly, I prefer to see him drinking a beer
Anyway each one --> Anyway, each one
you open the TV, immediately, you are running to the fridge and open a... beer --> you turn on the TV, immediately, you are running to the fridge and opening... a beer
Damn it is too cold outside, a barbecue --> Damn, it is too cold outside - a barbecue
dyeing? --> dying?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Stop freaking out and stop watching numbers.... they are not always acccurate... ;) Thanx for sharing, Iza - get some fresh air! :) Yvette
working 8 hour on --> working 8 hours on
family my kitties --> family! My kitties
"girl" and it's hiding his edible --> "girl" and is hiding his snacks
Honestly I prefer to see him drinking a beer, --> Honestly, I prefer to see him drinking a beer
Anyway each one --> Anyway, each one
you open the TV, immediately, you are running to the fridge and open a... beer --> you turn on the TV, immediately, you are running to the fridge and opening... a beer
Damn it is too cold outside, a barbecue --> Damn, it is too cold outside - a barbecue
dyeing? --> dying?
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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As usual, thank you so much my dear Lady, you made me laugh reading your review and thank you so much for your grammar corrections.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was not at all what I was expecting from your title. That led me to believe it was going to be a countdown to the authors need for a ventilator/death. You might want to consider changing the title. Otherwise it is interesting and keeps up with the rapidly changing world-wide changes that have been put into effect.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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This was not at all what I was expecting from your title. That led me to believe it was going to be a countdown to the authors need for a ventilator/death. You might want to consider changing the title. Otherwise it is interesting and keeps up with the rapidly changing world-wide changes that have been put into effect.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review and the title is part of the Corona song:)
Comment from estory
This is a natural instinct in people; get drunk, or get high, try to forget about it. pretend it's not there. I like how dance your way out of the depression and dream of bbq. I am getting tired of all this bad news myself. I think the media is really fanning the flames too much by making people paranoid of shaking hands, touching mail, going out in public. Who is going to go back to a restaurant when they reopen? estory
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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This is a natural instinct in people; get drunk, or get high, try to forget about it. pretend it's not there. I like how dance your way out of the depression and dream of bbq. I am getting tired of all this bad news myself. I think the media is really fanning the flames too much by making people paranoid of shaking hands, touching mail, going out in public. Who is going to go back to a restaurant when they reopen? estory
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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You are so right my friend, how can we be easily controlled? mass media paranoia. Take care of yourself and don't live in fear, God is protecting us, say a little pray and believe.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
It's interesting to read your feelings and your view on the virus.
Noticed two typos:
"Seriously, who cares how many are dyeing?" (dying)
"and bang! Here goes his lost breathe." (last breath)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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It's interesting to read your feelings and your view on the virus.
Noticed two typos:
"Seriously, who cares how many are dyeing?" (dying)
"and bang! Here goes his lost breathe." (last breath)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Rebecca for your continuous support of this saga and for your grammar corrections. Stay safe my dear friend.
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I am happy to help at any time.
Comment from lyenochka
Keep dancing and listening to music. That is good for you! I agree that I wish with all those depressing stats, they should give us the number of millions who recovered from the virus!
"how many are dyeing?" (dying) Really - this is the last time I'll mention this one.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Keep dancing and listening to music. That is good for you! I agree that I wish with all those depressing stats, they should give us the number of millions who recovered from the virus!
"how many are dyeing?" (dying) Really - this is the last time I'll mention this one.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Mother Google keep pushing the wrong form
So sorry
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Lol! That's cute.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write Iza and I so agree with you about being bombarded with he Corona news whenever I turn on the TV. Just now the UK are running an advert both on the TV and on the radio telling everyone to stay indoors and save the NHS (The National Health Service) never mind save your own skin! It is like the world has just gone crazy! In some respects the snow would have kept you at home anyway and by the time the summer comes the virus will be history we all hope! Take care and start at home . . . . Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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This is a fun write Iza and I so agree with you about being bombarded with he Corona news whenever I turn on the TV. Just now the UK are running an advert both on the TV and on the radio telling everyone to stay indoors and save the NHS (The National Health Service) never mind save your own skin! It is like the world has just gone crazy! In some respects the snow would have kept you at home anyway and by the time the summer comes the virus will be history we all hope! Take care and start at home . . . . Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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You made me laugh Ms. Dolly, we just got another day of snow. Summer is somewhere else, I don;t think will have one soon
