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PUNNY or Not, Here I Come

Something borrowed, something new, some I blew...

4 total reviews 
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

No 'clawful' puns here - most of them tickled my funny bone. I think I would only change 'aquire' to 'acquire' to have it spelled correctly. You really did a full-fledged job on this poem! Very, very nice entry for April Fools' Day!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thanks for the tip. I shall change right away. Always feels good to make somebody laugh. I had fun writing this. My favorite is "Is that sentence asleep, or in a coma." Fun to write this kind of stuff - with a little red wine for lubricity-of-logic. Thanks for your great review and your laughs!
reply by CrystieCookie999 on 01-Apr-2020
    You are welcome. I think I will sponsor more pun-related contests in the future.
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
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What a tour-de-force of outrageous showing off! Your poem deserves to win, so I hope it does. Skill, humour, and rhyming on display coming thick and fast.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    My wife might agree to "tour-de-farce", but this one was really fun to write. Could not find the start button until late, but then it just rolled. An appropriate amount of Malbec red seemed to grease the grears... Thanks for a great review!
reply by LisaMay on 01-Apr-2020
    In vino veritas. Here's cheers. I have a nice Shiraz in my hand.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This is a fun write and you certainly fulfilled the brief here with your PUNs! A clever write and this could be a winner me-thinks, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    So nice to hear from you again. Was late getting started, but then, with a little wine, I completely lost control of my puns. My favorite is, "Is that sentence asleep, or in a coma?"I woke up laughing at it. I may need professional help... Thanks for a great review!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
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A totally far out and groovy lightning and pun-derstorm, author. I got quite a chuckle out your poem jack punned with cobblers and gobblers and "murder most fowl".

A fine poem indeed and here's wishing you good luck in the voting booth.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Your sentence shall be PUNitive for being so PUN-dering of such an insulting LamPUNer of the English language - but, only if I tell them who you are... and I don't know. So, thanks!