The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "A Mind's Third Eye "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I also have started believing what you have said or expressed in this one line poem, maybe a mind's third eye (I think I do not have) is set by what is being pumped through its eyes and ears (I should have written its eyes not it's eye's).
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I also have started believing what you have said or expressed in this one line poem, maybe a mind's third eye (I think I do not have) is set by what is being pumped through its eyes and ears (I should have written its eyes not it's eye's).
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the Continued Support and Review.
The correction is Appreciated and I'll make the correction.
Comment from samandlancelot
QC Poet,
Hmm. Right now I am fascinated by the picture you paired with your poem, and I am listening to classical music. I think my mind's third eye's heart rate is stimulated by what it sees and hears. More stimulating from the picture and your poem, and more soothing from the music, to keep the heart rate at a good level for creativity.
Anyway, I enjoyed the experience of your poem.
Eye's (eyes) and Ears!
Patricia
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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QC Poet,
Hmm. Right now I am fascinated by the picture you paired with your poem, and I am listening to classical music. I think my mind's third eye's heart rate is stimulated by what it sees and hears. More stimulating from the picture and your poem, and more soothing from the music, to keep the heart rate at a good level for creativity.
Anyway, I enjoyed the experience of your poem.
Eye's (eyes) and Ears!
Patricia
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the Support, Review and Comments. Getting L8 in California. I Appreciate the review and correction.
