Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "World At A Standstill"na-po-wri-mo contest
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Comment from Amy Greta
Wow! I love how you connected the "crown" virus to Jesus' thorny crown, painful & uncertain. Many will relate to your poem; the first two lines had me hooked and the clever rhyme scheme and thoughtful comparisons (disease is now our enemy for example; particularly concerning because it's so unpredictable) had me wanting to read more. Maybe you'll write a part 2 eventually. You could create a pandemic poetry series! Excellent craftsmanship.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Wow! I love how you connected the "crown" virus to Jesus' thorny crown, painful & uncertain. Many will relate to your poem; the first two lines had me hooked and the clever rhyme scheme and thoughtful comparisons (disease is now our enemy for example; particularly concerning because it's so unpredictable) had me wanting to read more. Maybe you'll write a part 2 eventually. You could create a pandemic poetry series! Excellent craftsmanship.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Amy, thanks for your compliments and review. I have written a couple of other poems about the virus, this month, such as "Corona," and "From a (social) Distance" Dove
Comment from Iza Deleanu
In some countries, this is how the streets are looking : deserted and sad, the only people on the street being the law enforcers. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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In some countries, this is how the streets are looking : deserted and sad, the only people on the street being the law enforcers. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Iza, thanks for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from samandlancelot
Dove Marie,
I agree this is God's will. I think there are some unbelievers getting ready to ask about our hope in the midst of this fearful pandemic. I hope we all ready to give them our answer. I enjoyed your poem and the connection you made between God and what is going on.
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dove Marie,
I agree this is God's will. I think there are some unbelievers getting ready to ask about our hope in the midst of this fearful pandemic. I hope we all ready to give them our answer. I enjoyed your poem and the connection you made between God and what is going on.
Patricia
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Patricia, thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from January L'Angelle
Everything you've said is so true. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is so current and really resonates. "Christ has taken his thorny crown and set it on our head." Yes he has! Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Everything you've said is so true. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is so current and really resonates. "Christ has taken his thorny crown and set it on our head." Yes he has! Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear January, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is an extremely well written and so true poem you have penned my friend. The picture you chose went so well with your words. Thank you for sharing this. I hope it touches the hearts that need it today. May God bless you and protect you! love, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Donna, This is an extremely well written and so true poem you have penned my friend. The picture you chose went so well with your words. Thank you for sharing this. I hope it touches the hearts that need it today. May God bless you and protect you! love, Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your review. and compliments. Stay safe. Love, Donna
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, there's school - I can surely attest to that! Sigh. :) :) This is such a beautifully reflective offering, Dove, with a wonderful weaving of Bible verse that fits seamlessly with your own! ;) Thanx for sharing that uplifting message! ;)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Oh, there's school - I can surely attest to that! Sigh. :) :) This is such a beautifully reflective offering, Dove, with a wonderful weaving of Bible verse that fits seamlessly with your own! ;) Thanx for sharing that uplifting message! ;)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Beautifully done and well crafted. The artwork is awe inspiring. It feels that we are all indeed awaiting entry into our eternal home. Thank you for sharing this. It is greatly appreciated at such a time as this. Good work!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Beautifully done and well crafted. The artwork is awe inspiring. It feels that we are all indeed awaiting entry into our eternal home. Thank you for sharing this. It is greatly appreciated at such a time as this. Good work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Dear Brenda, Thank you for your review and compliments. Dove
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You're welcome!
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