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a poem20 total reviews
Comment from Jen Vasquez
Cute... Simple I definitely can feel the amount of love he has for this particular woman....The 1st sentence sounds a little funny "somewhere on this world" other then that great work..
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Cute... Simple I definitely can feel the amount of love he has for this particular woman....The 1st sentence sounds a little funny "somewhere on this world" other then that great work..
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Jen.
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No problem.. at all
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
We do not know our real state and position or place of living, but the lovers believe to meet at the same place here to begin a new day with joy; a nice love poem; wish you win the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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We do not know our real state and position or place of living, but the lovers believe to meet at the same place here to begin a new day with joy; a nice love poem; wish you win the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from judiverse
A lovely thought about love being right there. It's reassuring to have that constant love in your life. What is your subject for meet in the next to the last line? Very striking artwork choice. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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A lovely thought about love being right there. It's reassuring to have that constant love in your life. What is your subject for meet in the next to the last line? Very striking artwork choice. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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The subject is understood as YOU from the previous line.
you remain you meet
Happy day
Comment from jenintorre
What a wonderfully romantic poem. Your few words say such a lot.I think this is a very good entry for the love poem competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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What a wonderfully romantic poem. Your few words say such a lot.I think this is a very good entry for the love poem competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Jen
Comment from susand3022
How lovely, Bill... alas for us, I have no 6 to give you so you'll have to settle for the lip service. It's a beautiful poem, it's very touching, totally 6-worthy. :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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How lovely, Bill... alas for us, I have no 6 to give you so you'll have to settle for the lip service. It's a beautiful poem, it's very touching, totally 6-worthy. :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Susan, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Bill,
Beautiful entry for the love poem poetry contest. It's very romantic and well written. I like the presentation too.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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by Bill Schott
Hello, Bill,
Beautiful entry for the love poem poetry contest. It's very romantic and well written. I like the presentation too.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Bill, this is a lovely poem of love - short but real. It sounds personal and sincere. I like the picture and the whole is a lovely presentation. A good entry to the contest. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello Bill, this is a lovely poem of love - short but real. It sounds personal and sincere. I like the picture and the whole is a lovely presentation. A good entry to the contest. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Bill, this is a lovely love declaration, and so lovingly written. I is a short poem, indeed,but the words speak volumes. A great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Awe, Bill, this is a lovely love declaration, and so lovingly written. I is a short poem, indeed,but the words speak volumes. A great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Ulla
Comment from Mistydawn
What a sweet poem. It's so warm, heartfelt. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind of a couple madly in love. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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What a sweet poem. It's so warm, heartfelt. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind of a couple madly in love. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, MD.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, we do not know when we will no longer be here, but while we are we should greet each day with joy. If we wake up happy then our day has started off on the right foot. Well written meaningful poem!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Yes, we do not know when we will no longer be here, but while we are we should greet each day with joy. If we wake up happy then our day has started off on the right foot. Well written meaningful poem!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, TT, for giving this a look. Bill
