Obsessive Tendencies
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Life in a Bubble"An Unlikely Journey Toward Reconstruction
19 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Very interesting development. At least, she doesn't have to deal with this situation all alone. It's comforting to know that she has close companions that she can trust with this kind of craziness. Nice developments and always beautifully written - moving on...
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Yvette,
Very interesting development. At least, she doesn't have to deal with this situation all alone. It's comforting to know that she has close companions that she can trust with this kind of craziness. Nice developments and always beautifully written - moving on...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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You really know how to make a girl feel good!! :) :) ;)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I confess I am partial to the icy Emerald eyes. As for etting her voice unstuck--that I cannot relate to! Clever banter between the two--sounds natural; amusing when she thinks up incredible excuses, dismissing them one by one. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I confess I am partial to the icy Emerald eyes. As for etting her voice unstuck--that I cannot relate to! Clever banter between the two--sounds natural; amusing when she thinks up incredible excuses, dismissing them one by one. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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They're fun to write! ;) Thanx for the review, LIZ -- appreciate your stopping by! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvette, I will be perfectly honest. I'm not into fantasy writing, but this is very well written, and for some reason, I would like to carry on reading. A great chapter, indeed. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Hi Yvette, I will be perfectly honest. I'm not into fantasy writing, but this is very well written, and for some reason, I would like to carry on reading. A great chapter, indeed. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Totally get it, Ulla - fantasy is certainly not the most popular genre... but it is mine! ;) :) You are so awesome to drop by and read through this one, and I would LOVE to have you hop on board with Celeste and Gregor -- gonna be an interesting ride! ;) Thank you for the wonderful review and may you have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A fairy and a werewolf? Sounds like a J. R. Rowling novel. I have to back track and see if I read the other chapters in your book. It sounds like a scientific story. If I met a werewolf in real life, I probably would run.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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A fairy and a werewolf? Sounds like a J. R. Rowling novel. I have to back track and see if I read the other chapters in your book. It sounds like a scientific story. If I met a werewolf in real life, I probably would run.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Oh, I hope it's not like J.R., Rosy -- don't think I'd recommend some parts to the kiddos! ;) ;) Thanx for your review, my lady -- your time and your support is so appreciated!! ;)
Comment from May 1
Yes, I was wondering the same. Why are they privileged with the possibility to hide. Great chapter. I especially love the ending, it was fun relief after such a tense situation.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yes, I was wondering the same. Why are they privileged with the possibility to hide. Great chapter. I especially love the ending, it was fun relief after such a tense situation.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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It's been almost as enjoyable for me to write these two as it has been to go back and read them -- so glad you're enjoying as well! ;) Have a great week, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Yup... sooo worth it! LOL, At least now she has a couple of co-conspirators! You know how I said, you should stick to two? Well, maybe three... but no more than that, and you've got to write faster... think of it as your travel time! LOL 5 days a week, however long a day... rotate days! :) I know, I'm good at other peoples lives, I can't finish cleaning out my own bathroom... I did get the linen closet cleaned out though... three bags of trash, including all kinds of baby bedding and crap like that... the baby's only 19... It's been down there for well over a decade. LOL, #cleaning bit-by-bit while Shawn's stuck in Maine ;)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yup... sooo worth it! LOL, At least now she has a couple of co-conspirators! You know how I said, you should stick to two? Well, maybe three... but no more than that, and you've got to write faster... think of it as your travel time! LOL 5 days a week, however long a day... rotate days! :) I know, I'm good at other peoples lives, I can't finish cleaning out my own bathroom... I did get the linen closet cleaned out though... three bags of trash, including all kinds of baby bedding and crap like that... the baby's only 19... It's been down there for well over a decade. LOL, #cleaning bit-by-bit while Shawn's stuck in Maine ;)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yeah... three's the limit, I promise. I need all the 'escape' I can get these days -- and all these characters give me an outlet (and I can choose my outlet mood depending on the story, yeah? lol!). I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, BLOTN, and I'm so sorry I'm so far behind.... I am totally working more 'hours' with this nuttiness than when things were 'normal'! ;) :) I had all these big plans to do what you're doing.... right now, not a damn thing extra has happened - ugh!! :) You take care and get some work done for me in the process #studentsneedtheirclassroomsback!! ;) Yvette
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Today I hung a lot of pictures back on the walls... all with command strips! YES! Tons of sticky tape on the walls... Oh well... sick of waiting for the man to finish whatever it was he was supposed to be finishing around here anyway... take care of you BLOTS! :)
Comment from aryr
Great. Absolutely great, Yvette. This was well played out. Joaquim was such a tease to poor Celeste and Justine fell right into the plot. I am guessing it was for special effects that Joaquim fell off the rock and into the stream. Very well done, very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Great. Absolutely great, Yvette. This was well played out. Joaquim was such a tease to poor Celeste and Justine fell right into the plot. I am guessing it was for special effects that Joaquim fell off the rock and into the stream. Very well done, very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for keeping up with Celeste and Gregor, Alie -- your support is a blessing! ;) Have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
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Very much enjoyed, Yvette.
Comment from w.j.debi
I love the teasing between the friends, even as uncomfortable as it makes Celeste to admit it. I love the end too when Joaquim is caught off-guard. It was so worth it! Obviously, they know who Gergor is, and just what a huge problem it is going to create between the realms. Ooo, this just keeps getting juicier and juicier.
Keep it coming.
Excellent storytelling and writing. I can't wait for the next episode!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I love the teasing between the friends, even as uncomfortable as it makes Celeste to admit it. I love the end too when Joaquim is caught off-guard. It was so worth it! Obviously, they know who Gergor is, and just what a huge problem it is going to create between the realms. Ooo, this just keeps getting juicier and juicier.
Keep it coming.
Excellent storytelling and writing. I can't wait for the next episode!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hooray!! You get it!! You really get it all!! THANK YOU so much for such a wonderful review, W.J., and I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!! ;) All these crazy stories are my escape from reality... and right now, I don't have near enough time to go where my imagination wants to.... but I am determined to find some 'new normal' amidst all of this 'crazy'!! Even if I gotta start sneaking to my computer at odd hours like I used to do when the boys were little -- LOL!! ;) ;) Thank you again, my lady, and have a wonderful weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Life in a Bubble
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
You have quite an imagination. You created a whole new world with very unique characters. So these creatures live inside a bubble? How does the relationship with a fairy and a wolf work? I have a hard time following fantasy stories...I am sorry. You do a great job, I wish I could write like you. Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Life in a Bubble
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
You have quite an imagination. You created a whole new world with very unique characters. So these creatures live inside a bubble? How does the relationship with a fairy and a wolf work? I have a hard time following fantasy stories...I am sorry. You do a great job, I wish I could write like you. Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Imagination I go loads of... patience? not so much - lol!! ;) But, don't worry about following, Gypsy - I totally understand! I am just so very grateful for your support, my lady! ;) Have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bichon
Unfortunately I don't blame I've read previous chapters of this, but it is extremely creative! The characters themselves had great depth to them combined with excellent characterisation, which is always great. I must read previous chapters!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Unfortunately I don't blame I've read previous chapters of this, but it is extremely creative! The characters themselves had great depth to them combined with excellent characterisation, which is always great. I must read previous chapters!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thanx for stopping in for the read and review, Chloe -- your time is appreciated! ;)
