~ Thunder Storm ~
5-7-5 Contest Entry13 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Thunderstorms are captivating and at the same time frightening. Your three line entry for the contest is well illustrated and worded. Good luck to you. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thunderstorms are captivating and at the same time frightening. Your three line entry for the contest is well illustrated and worded. Good luck to you. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Hello Marilyn, sorry for the late thank you. I thought I had already responded to your welcomed review. Hope you are well and staying safe indoors. ~DDx
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
DD!
Such a pulsing phrase is your first line. Of course, the thunder's applause is appropriate to the overall theme for this post and its accompanying artwork.
Best wishes for your entry.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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DD!
Such a pulsing phrase is your first line. Of course, the thunder's applause is appropriate to the overall theme for this post and its accompanying artwork.
Best wishes for your entry.
Mark
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you Mark. It is always good to hear from you. Hope you are keeping well your end. Kind regards ~DD
Comment from lauralumummu
There have been some strange storms and winds as well in Canada. This is a great entry for the contest a three-line haiku. Good works 3 lines say a lot. All the best, Laura
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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There have been some strange storms and winds as well in Canada. This is a great entry for the contest a three-line haiku. Good works 3 lines say a lot. All the best, Laura
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you Laura. I appreciate the time taken to review my short poem. Have a good weekend. ~DD
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this vividly descriptive poem. It resonated with me because I find lightning mesmerizing; then--after I'm wowed by it--I hope no person or home got hit!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this vividly descriptive poem. It resonated with me because I find lightning mesmerizing; then--after I'm wowed by it--I hope no person or home got hit!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I hear you Janice. It is so mesmerising, hard to concentrate properly when driving too. Don't want to miss out on all the display. And, like you I then worry about damage. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a nice weekend. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
Brilliantly done, DD! Loved your "thunder claps" which has two meanings and the "electric fingers" are putting on stunning performance. Thanks for the recap of the natural disasters there and hope you and yours stay safe!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Brilliantly done, DD! Loved your "thunder claps" which has two meanings and the "electric fingers" are putting on stunning performance. Thanks for the recap of the natural disasters there and hope you and yours stay safe!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank so much for your thoughtfulness Helen and encouraging review. We are all safe here with the pandemic in early stages compared to other parts of the world. Stay safe your end. ~Dxox
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, DD. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow well with great imagery. Your syllable count is correct per line. The image is perfect to pair with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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You did a great job with your contest entry, DD. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow well with great imagery. Your syllable count is correct per line. The image is perfect to pair with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you Jan. Your reviews are always much appreciated. Kindest regards ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PoemsOfDD
How are you with this?
I read what you said about
the present virus that you had thunderstorms in Australia.
Now to comment on your 3 lines, of streaks of lighting looking like fingers and then the thunder claps ---
is really good.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hello PoemsOfDD
How are you with this?
I read what you said about
the present virus that you had thunderstorms in Australia.
Now to comment on your 3 lines, of streaks of lighting looking like fingers and then the thunder claps ---
is really good.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Gert, thank you. Your review was very thoughtful. I am well. I hope you are looking after yourself your end, staying home and washing your hands. Be safe and have a good weekend. ~DD
Comment from papa55mike
Can we say, a sign of the times? I love lightning also. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is amazing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day an God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Can we say, a sign of the times? I love lightning also. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is amazing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day an God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you Mike for the review and contest wishes. Have a good weekend. ~DD
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short piece tells of thunder applauding the lightning show.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short piece tells of thunder applauding the lightning show.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Sharon, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Have a good weekend. ~DD
Comment from rspoet
Hello DD,
What a marvelous 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with clever word play and wonderful imagery.
It's like watching the creator conduct nature.
One small suggestion to move the tilde to line two
to act as a cutting symbol for the satori line.:
electric fingers
play wildly to enthrall crowd~
thunder claps loudly
Very well done.
This could be a winner.
Best wishes to you.
Stay safe.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hello DD,
What a marvelous 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with clever word play and wonderful imagery.
It's like watching the creator conduct nature.
One small suggestion to move the tilde to line two
to act as a cutting symbol for the satori line.:
electric fingers
play wildly to enthrall crowd~
thunder claps loudly
Very well done.
This could be a winner.
Best wishes to you.
Stay safe.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much Robert. I appreciate your very encouraging review and constructive comment. I did deliberate on it before I posted. I have since amended. Thank you again. Kind regards. ~DD
