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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Sing me to sleep"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

8 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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You know to think about Halloween is a little unreal. If we live or die is perhaps on our mind right now. We have lots of it in the states here, too. I will never think that this virus is an act of God? Do you? Perhaps He's trying to wake us up.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    It might be an act of man blamed on God, free will, remember...
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, it is a scary time for all the world over. You did a great job detailing the effects of the virus where you live. I like the idea of the singing from the balconies. One never knows how s/he will react until it is them feeling the effects of this evil thing. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
    I am telling you, how I reacted, I panicked:) not so brave of me:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Good story. Defiance through out-singing the plague. My philosophy indeed. For me, joining Fanstory is a godsend--spending hours here, posting a backlog. Hang in there. LIZ Love the picture--lots of fun stuff on there--Corona beer relabeled Ebola! I put several parody pieces on my profile page. WARNING: CONTENT MAY OFFEND

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
    Thank you, and poor Corona doesn't deserve this bad reputation.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such an interesting offering, Iza -- very entertaining, my lady!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your series!! ;) Yvette

playing at different instruments and bringing up to life --> playing different instruments and bringing to life

Italians, and I feel --> Italians, I feel

but virtually getting closer by singing, that's --> but getting closer, virtually, by singing: that's

a way, because we --> a way because we

Try to sing here a serenade on the balcony when are minus sixteen degrees, your hands --> Try serenading on the balcony here when temperature is minus sixteen degrees, and your hands

cases, shortly after them --> cases. Close behind them

from Alberta are following close --> from Alberta, are a close third

points and finally the Jets from Manitoba with --> points, and, finally, the Jets from Manitoba have

I hope is just --> I hope it is just


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Ms. Yvette, thank you so much for your detailed review and the corrections of my terrible grammar:) You are my Angle in disguise, Miss. Brilliant Teacher. Thank you so much and stay safe my dear friend.
Comment from estory
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It gets scarier and scarier as it hits closer to home. When your co worker gets sick, that's really scary. I liked how you described the spirit of the Italians caught in the grips of the epidemic, singing to boost their morale and cope with the isolation. And I liked that closing image of the Halloween costume; the hazmat suit. yes that might be the star costume this year if this passes by then. great personality in the writing. estory

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for accompanying me in this crazy adventure:)Please stay save .
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Everyone should practice keeping a diary during this time to stay busy and relieve stress. Try to find the lessons learned. Folks should get back to reading the Bible. Most have forgotten God.

"13 If I shut up the heavens so that there is no rain, or if I command the locust to devour the land, or if I send pestilence among my people; 14 if my people, [c]who are called by my name, shall humble themselves, and pray, and seek my face, and turn from their wicked ways; then will I hear from heaven, and will forgive their sin, and will heal their land."

2 Chronicles 7:13-14
















 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    I don't know if you are aware, but the locusts are attacking right now Africa:(
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 20-Mar-2020
    God's talking.
Comment from Fonda Little
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My favorite part was, "Well, they found a very humanitarian mode to deal with it: they sing the virus to death.", because it's so positive, and it's great to see people uniting instead of dividing especially during a crisis!

The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,

Proverbs 18:21 New International Version (NIV)

21 The tongue has the power of life and death,
and those who love it will eat its fruit.

1 Peter 5:7 New International Version (NIV)

7 Cast all your anxiety on him because he cares for you.



 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    I totally agree with your statement -
    7 Cast all your anxiety on him because he cares for you.
Comment from lyenochka
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I hope your co-worker doesn't have the Covid-19. Please stay healthy. Wish you didn't have to go into work and could be at home!
Yes, it's heart-warming that the Italians know how to sing to encourage one another. The Chinese in Wuhan would shout out slogans at each other to cheer each other.
Comments:
"the guitar cords." (chords?) Perhaps you meant guitar strings?
" Ups, my co-worker" (Oops? not ups)
" I hope is " (it's not is?)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you Helen, and my coworker,well I don't want to be evil,but I think she is faking because she wants to stay home. My Boss called her to see how she was feeling and her husband said the she is out. .. So tonight I will post something about the fakers:( unfortunately they are a lot nowdays.