Through Her Eyes acrostic sonnet
Love poem contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done mix of two forms, the accrostic and the Shakespearean soonnet. It shows the passion, romance, and love in this relationship. Eyes are the true mirror to emotional state.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a well done mix of two forms, the accrostic and the Shakespearean soonnet. It shows the passion, romance, and love in this relationship. Eyes are the true mirror to emotional state.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Joan. I really appreciate the generous stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great night.
;)
Ron
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Hey Ron,
You're welcome on all accounts.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment from Cindy Decker
Congratulations on your win. Very beautiful acrostic poem. I don't have 6 stars to give you, but I would like to. I love the words that you've chosen: enchanting, enticing, embracing. Very good work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Congratulations on your win. Very beautiful acrostic poem. I don't have 6 stars to give you, but I would like to. I love the words that you've chosen: enchanting, enticing, embracing. Very good work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and the big six offer, Cindy. I dearly appreciate the congrats and gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great night.
Ron
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Dear Ron, you?re very welcome. A very touching poem.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and elegant; fresh phrasing in flawless rhythm and rhyme. I never would have guessed this was acrostic--there's not a false note, no tell-tale forcing to fit. Congrats on a well-deserved prize. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Lovely and elegant; fresh phrasing in flawless rhythm and rhyme. I never would have guessed this was acrostic--there's not a false note, no tell-tale forcing to fit. Congrats on a well-deserved prize. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. Elizabeth. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Wow!!!! Wow!!! Congratulations, for a minute I forgot where I was! It was magic! Like the colors you used! I have already read it 3 times! This is the first time I wish they allowed us to put more stars! I would vote 10 stars!!! The least!!! Again congratulations that was amazing!!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Wow!!!! Wow!!! Congratulations, for a minute I forgot where I was! It was magic! Like the colors you used! I have already read it 3 times! This is the first time I wish they allowed us to put more stars! I would vote 10 stars!!! The least!!! Again congratulations that was amazing!!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Hey, Marianne, hello. Thank you so much for the gracious stars and kind words. I'm glad to liked the piece and happy to see you jumped on as a fan. I hope you have a wonderful day. Thank you again, Marianne.
;)
Ron
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No, thank you for this poem ! It reached my soul !
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I'm glad, M. I see you're new to the site so let me welcome you. I've been on here for close to 13 years. I mostly just join the contests. Love the competition. Lol. If you ever need some help with anything just give me a holler and I'll try to help any way I can.
Thanks again, Marianne.
Ron
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Thank you for allowing me to contact you if I need help, I will have it in mind, since there are some things that I can not understand due to the fact that it is not my mother tongue.. Thanks a lot
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I really enjoyed this Acrostic. I had great problems picking my favourite line, but I think it's "Enchanting is her gaze, but wanting more,"
Please consider:
"Enticing are her treasurers to explore" I have a horrible feeling that this would be better as "treasures"
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed this Acrostic. I had great problems picking my favourite line, but I think it's "Enchanting is her gaze, but wanting more,"
Please consider:
"Enticing are her treasurers to explore" I have a horrible feeling that this would be better as "treasures"
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Katherine. I can't believe how many times I've read over this that I didn't catch this myself. Out of all my reviews you are the only one to mention this. Thank you so much for catching that. I went and fixed it. I appreciate the gracious stars and help. Have a wonderful day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, Ron, this one is simply beautiful - a sonnet that speaks of the allure of the female and what her touch can do to a man... and it all starts with those eyes of blue. Even your rhythm and rhyme entices your reader from beginning to end, sir -- and the fact that it's a sonnet...? You've earned these stars and more... CAPTIVATING! ;) :) Best of luck in the contest (not that I think you'll need it!) :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Well, Ron, this one is simply beautiful - a sonnet that speaks of the allure of the female and what her touch can do to a man... and it all starts with those eyes of blue. Even your rhythm and rhyme entices your reader from beginning to end, sir -- and the fact that it's a sonnet...? You've earned these stars and more... CAPTIVATING! ;) :) Best of luck in the contest (not that I think you'll need it!) :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hey, Yvette, hello. Thank you so much for the big sixer. Yeah, sometimes I actually try on here. Lol I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and kind words, Y. I'm glad you liked my little love poem. Have yourself a glorious day. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from susand3022
Hi Ron, what a lovely love poem... and an Acrostic Sonnet! I have enough trouble with a regular Sonnet, but to add an Acrostic restriction is just a little superlative and show-offy if you ask me... LOL Very well done dear... kudos! :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hi Ron, what a lovely love poem... and an Acrostic Sonnet! I have enough trouble with a regular Sonnet, but to add an Acrostic restriction is just a little superlative and show-offy if you ask me... LOL Very well done dear... kudos! :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Lol. Yeah, I like to show off sometimes. Thank you so much for the kind review and giant sixer, Susan. I just like to give myself a little more of a challenge when it comes to sonnets. I love the form. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Susan. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
;)
Ron
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This deserves six stars. Sorry, I don't have any. A Sonnet and an Acrostic poem would not be the easiest of compositions. This is a splendid lilting Sonnet with beautiful meaningful words, so well done.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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This deserves six stars. Sorry, I don't have any. A Sonnet and an Acrostic poem would not be the easiest of compositions. This is a splendid lilting Sonnet with beautiful meaningful words, so well done.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review and the big six offer, Raffaelina. I dearly appreciate the kind review. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Minglement
Wow, you tackled a daunting task for this entry in the Love Poem contest. An acrostic sonnet! And you used it to pen a beautiful, romantic poem filled with lovely imagery. Great presentation as always :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Wow, you tackled a daunting task for this entry in the Love Poem contest. An acrostic sonnet! And you used it to pen a beautiful, romantic poem filled with lovely imagery. Great presentation as always :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Minglement. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
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You're most welcome. My pleasure :)
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My pleasure :)
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear dragon, this post deserves a six star rating for craftsmanship alone! Even I can see three places where lists of proffered love abide.
How long did it take you to ready this work for release?
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Dear dragon, this post deserves a six star rating for craftsmanship alone! Even I can see three places where lists of proffered love abide.
How long did it take you to ready this work for release?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hey, Suzanna, hello. I dearly appreciate the gracious sixer and kind words. It took me a few hour. I worked on it for two days but only about 2 hours each day. I love writing sonnets and I like challenging myself a bit more by making them acrostics as well. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Suzanna. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
