Broken
Old, worn out, broken.66 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
The great thing about human beings, we were created by a perfect mater of creation. Our creator Jehovah God, can restore any one of his creations; shine us up and put a new coat of paint on us and make us better than new. We ,must never lose hope or give up.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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The great thing about human beings, we were created by a perfect mater of creation. Our creator Jehovah God, can restore any one of his creations; shine us up and put a new coat of paint on us and make us better than new. We ,must never lose hope or give up.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you, nomi338, for your words of wisdom/reminder. Linda
Comment from Puzzle
Love this. Loved the comparison of your broken feelings to tangible things which are broken. It sucks when we get hurt so badly we feel as useless as a broken machine. Feelings are really hard to explain sometimes.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Love this. Loved the comparison of your broken feelings to tangible things which are broken. It sucks when we get hurt so badly we feel as useless as a broken machine. Feelings are really hard to explain sometimes.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Dana, thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Drew Delaney
A sad place to find oneself. Your comparison of life being used up and finally at its breaking point is good. I kinda feel like that myself. Old, battered and torn. I like your play on words.
Drew
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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A sad place to find oneself. Your comparison of life being used up and finally at its breaking point is good. I kinda feel like that myself. Old, battered and torn. I like your play on words.
Drew
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Drew, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, though sad in narrative, the spirit of the write is unmistakably heartfelt and fluid in both expression and movement - stunning in capturing the plaintive quality of the poet's words...
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, though sad in narrative, the spirit of the write is unmistakably heartfelt and fluid in both expression and movement - stunning in capturing the plaintive quality of the poet's words...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Eve. Linda
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You are very welcome, Linda, an absorbing read...Eve
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
This is a very good illustration used for this piece.
Your thoughts are consistent with abuse, neglect and other mind-bending characteristics.
You point out the damage caused by these issues.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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This is a very good illustration used for this piece.
Your thoughts are consistent with abuse, neglect and other mind-bending characteristics.
You point out the damage caused by these issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you. Linda
Comment from rjuselius
This is a tragic piece of poetry dear Linda! I think we all go through that but the intensity varies.a bravo for bringing something so personal and intimate to the table.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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This is a tragic piece of poetry dear Linda! I think we all go through that but the intensity varies.a bravo for bringing something so personal and intimate to the table.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Rebekka! Linda
Comment from samandlancelot
Lively Linda,
I love your expression of brokenness and the inanimate breakdowns you use to correlate your feelings. Age seems to be a factor that has tired you and wore you down. Perhaps surgeries glue you back together, but you'll never be the same.
I like your rhymes and your repeated "I am broken."
Very moving and heartfelt expression.
Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Lively Linda,
I love your expression of brokenness and the inanimate breakdowns you use to correlate your feelings. Age seems to be a factor that has tired you and wore you down. Perhaps surgeries glue you back together, but you'll never be the same.
I like your rhymes and your repeated "I am broken."
Very moving and heartfelt expression.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading, commenting and for all those bright stars, Patricia. Linda
Comment from Aphthong
Wonderful write.. Even it is sad, the way you present is exquisite.. Age is just for the body we are trying to preserve.. If mind is still young, we can write fantastic poem like this about the broken body..
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Wonderful write.. Even it is sad, the way you present is exquisite.. Age is just for the body we are trying to preserve.. If mind is still young, we can write fantastic poem like this about the broken body..
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you. Linda
Comment from lyenochka
With concrete imagery, you describe the brokenness of the spirit. It is often these kinds of revelations or self-revelations that leads to a fresh perspective to new life in God.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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With concrete imagery, you describe the brokenness of the spirit. It is often these kinds of revelations or self-revelations that leads to a fresh perspective to new life in God.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Linda
Comment from crzypnter
I'm sure that many here who be able to relate as I do. The fragmented stanzas work well to form a cohesive story. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I'm sure that many here who be able to relate as I do. The fragmented stanzas work well to form a cohesive story. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, August. Linda
