Comment from Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent

A fascinating, very beautiful little 5-7-5 poem. It tells a whole story and speaks to the fantasy of the reader. Plus a wonderful image! Congrats, I loved it!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020

Thank you.

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 02-Mar-2020

So welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I really enjoyed these few words as children who read books go on a magical journey and ride with the dragons, a poignant and entertaining write and for me this is a winner, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020

Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. Have a wonderful night.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

You have followed the requirements for a haiku-type composition.

Your picture was well chosen for your 5-7-5.

I love to disappear into books as well.

Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020

Thank you for the great review and generous stars, RS. I really appreciate the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a lovely short poem that is a respectable contest entry. It describes how books can capture a child's imagination. The picture works well with it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Susan. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.

Comment from Natalie Goodwin

Excellent

Your poem vividly describes the beauty of getting lost in the world of a good book. I love the imagery of the elfin queen riding a dragon. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Natalie. I'm glad you liked the piece.