Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

Congratulations, Diana, on your tie-win for the Animal Nonet contest. This is a beautiful choice of animal, and your poem is very artistic in form, flow and in its soothing elegance -- much like the swans. The video is a nice touch. I love the way the two swans "neck" together and come together like a heart.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you! They are such lovely creatures! Thank you for appreciating! Amazing the love they showed each other in the video! xoxo

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

That is just beautiful. It gives me an image of romance. A couple on a bridge watching the river flow under them. Then the man, breaking the silence of the night, recites these words. It is his way of sharing how he feels about her.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020

Thank you! They are such beautiful creatures to watch! Appreciate you liked this!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
Absolutely beautiful in terms of form and message. Your poem is not contrived or paltry. It is rhythmic and creates a beautiful and lasting image of these lovely birds. Best Wishes!

diane

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020

Thank you so much. It?s only my second attempt at a Nonet! Appreciate your encouraging feedback!