Spring Palette of Forest Colours
A sequence of simplicities, set in New Zealand.10 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "Spring...Lovely Spring" writing prompt.
This lovely verse tells of the coming spring.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the "Spring...Lovely Spring" writing prompt.
This lovely verse tells of the coming spring.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good work. I love the very descriptive and well placed wording you've used in this. I also like the use of alliteration incorporated throughout. Thanks for sharing this well written work that gives us anticipation that Spring will be here soon. Great job and well done!
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This is really good work. I love the very descriptive and well placed wording you've used in this. I also like the use of alliteration incorporated throughout. Thanks for sharing this well written work that gives us anticipation that Spring will be here soon. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
Comment from Boogienights
First of all thank you for your notes, they were very informative. You named all of the vibrant colors of spring, and did it in a most carefully worded and delightful way. Painting a picture in the mind certainly applies here. Thanks for sharing.
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First of all thank you for your notes, they were very informative. You named all of the vibrant colors of spring, and did it in a most carefully worded and delightful way. Painting a picture in the mind certainly applies here. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
Comment from JP Writer
I enjoyed the images and your explanations of these exotic plants in your notes. But I think this would be stronger if you could overlay some emotions or thoughts each plant evokes as you watch them bloom.
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I enjoyed the images and your explanations of these exotic plants in your notes. But I think this would be stronger if you could overlay some emotions or thoughts each plant evokes as you watch them bloom.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the arrival of Spring after a cold snowy long winter. We enjoy the colorful blooms, the busy bees, and the chirping birds building nests in the trees.
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A very well-written poem about the arrival of Spring after a cold snowy long winter. We enjoy the colorful blooms, the busy bees, and the chirping birds building nests in the trees.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned about the spring pallet of forest colors. You used very good descriptive words and I love the picture you chose to use for this. Thanks for sharing. It is winter here where I live and spring is a few weeks away! Thanks for sharing. love and Blessings Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned about the spring pallet of forest colors. You used very good descriptive words and I love the picture you chose to use for this. Thanks for sharing. It is winter here where I live and spring is a few weeks away! Thanks for sharing. love and Blessings Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
No spring until September? Wow. For us September is the end of summer. This is a great entry for the spring contest. Good luck.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
No spring until September? Wow. For us September is the end of summer. This is a great entry for the spring contest. Good luck.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I live in the southern hemisphere, so we are having summer now, with autumn our next season. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sallyo
I don't know rata but kowhai is an old friend. My grandmother grew it many years ago. I like these snapshots of a bush walk. I'm surprised the ferns weren't silver though!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I don't know rata but kowhai is an old friend. My grandmother grew it many years ago. I like these snapshots of a bush walk. I'm surprised the ferns weren't silver though!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. How lovely that you have kowhai. Silver ferns are actually not that common in the South Island area where I live.... more common in NZ's North Island.
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My grandmother grew all sorts of odd things. She used to get o/s catalogues. We're in NW Tasmania, so have a cool temperate climate.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly brought the colour here and all we need do is open our eyes as it is all there for us to see, you brought the scene with your descriptive words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You certainly brought the colour here and all we need do is open our eyes as it is all there for us to see, you brought the scene with your descriptive words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
